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Mari and the Old Greenhouse By Smoge16 -- Report

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Whew. This one is old as hell. It's been sitting on my hard drive partially finished for at least two years now, and I figured I might as well buckle down and try to finish it.

Despite that, I'm not terribly happy with how it turned out. The ending in particular I feel is really lame. But, I don't wanna just throw away the entire thing, so on the off chance someone might enjoy it, into the scrap bucket it goes!

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BStone

Posted by BStone 3 years ago Report

Aw yes, Mari, plant girl, booba sucking and lotsa food. A recipe for disaster (one that I personally enjoy)
The way you describe how big she becomes is so juicy and detailed! Plus I think the ending is pretty ok, Mari never changes...
Thank you a lot for this good, good food!!!

TootCore

Posted by TootCore 3 years ago Report

I dunno, Smoge, I think this one is really good too.

Henry567

Posted by Henry567 3 years ago Report

I know im a lil late but this was fantastic