Posted by Nebulous2600 3 years ago Report

That was rather terrifying, thanks (⊙‿⊙✿)

Posted by ClosetMonster 3 years ago Report

Thanks, I was going for a horror vibe.

Posted by bwill194 3 years ago Report

Wow this was really well written. Loved the detail, and the dialog. Would love to see more of this!!

Posted by ClosetMonster 3 years ago Report

Thanks. I'm just getting back into writing and this was my first exercise. If there is anything you'd like to see I could use writing prompts.

Posted by The_Prof 3 years ago Report

well if you're looking for prompts I may as well toss out one of my favorite scenarios: A cruel individual finds themselves tiny and must seek help from the shy frail girl they loved to torment, only through a cruel twist to wind up the girl's lunch without her even knowing

Posted by ClosetMonster 3 years ago Report

Okay, I took your prompts and ran with them. This is the result: https://aryion.com/g4/view/744475

Posted by Beefsalad 3 years ago Report

~Soopky~ how delightful

Posted by RaptorJesus 3 years ago Report

well that was certainly an experience

Posted by Wilhelm00 3 years ago Report

Hot damn that was a good story

Posted by xvx17 3 years ago Report

So.good

Posted by EmmaTummy 1 year ago Report

Absolutely adore this. I've read through it too many times to admit... Would love some more in this style!