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A small chapter, taking us to the Amazonian capital. Who knows what might happen while travelling?
Also sorry it's taken so long to get this continued. Won't be too long before I submit the next part either.
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Posted by NobodySpecial 3 years ago Report
Oh, maybe some full tour?
Posted by Gershwin 3 years ago Report
Not in this universe, as you've seen from previous chapters (I assume) its semi-realistic in the safety department. Just wouldn't make a lot of sense!
Posted by NobodySpecial 3 years ago Report
Well, I mean. If you push yourself into the small intestine before it's ready then you could probably make it through, considering that this is only semi-realistic.
Posted by Gershwin 3 years ago Report
What I mean is I’ve already established what level of danger and realism being in the stomach poses, same with the gut.
Or put more plainly, no, that’s not something I’m interested in putting I this particular story, sorry.
Posted by XiaoRenzhe 3 years ago Report
Oh, maaaaaan! It’s about time you added to this! Cannot wait to read it!!
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report
God I missed these two
Posted by GeneralUrist 3 years ago Report
I liked this happy intimacy. Though, I don't get why going into the intestines would be a 'point of no return' from digestion.
Posted by Gershwin 3 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
To answer you, because if she went in there, she wouldn't be getting out again, not alive anyway. So, a "point of no" return.
Posted by blab123 3 years ago Report
Something tells me Mandy is going to be left alone somewhere and found by someone who doesn't appreciate her being in the capital.
Posted by Gershwin 3 years ago Report
Who knows! (Well, I do but I ain’t telling!) more to come soon :)
Posted by MechaSharkZilla 3 years ago Report
Every time you upload stories, it's wonderful. You really do a great job with these, and you should be proud of your work. <3
Posted by Gershwin 3 years ago Report
Thank you so much :) haha I’m proud of it … even though I just skimmed it just now and immediately found three or four typos. I swear I proofed it carefully.
Posted by anyany 3 years ago Report
hell yeah!
Posted by MCPB 2 years ago Report
Yay, can’t wait for another chapter