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Dr Madeleine Cooper, licensed therapist, has developed a niche interest in helping "small men" find a suitable station in life. She finds a patient with claustrophobia, and thinks she knows a wonderful place to test his tolerance to being trapped...
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Posted by clockwork 2 years ago Report
This is fantastically well written. Madeline is so well described and built up as a character, I was half expecting her to reach out and pluck me from the screen midway through reading.
Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report
Oh I wish she did that...
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
That's very kind, thank you <3
And yes she's been so fun to write. She's just so utterly committed to her dom role, no mercy <3
Posted by Whymanamajeff 2 years ago Report
This is an awesome story, the level of detail and subtle teasing that persists throughout is exactly the type of content I enjoy. Great stuff, would love to see more!
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Thank you <3 I try to sprinkle in lots of teasing during the build up to keep even the build up titillating where possible~
If you liked this I've written a few other Madeleine stories, and the original commissioner of the first Madeleine story has also gone on to write some fantastic F/M stories with her too (https://aryion.com/g4/user/nosuspicious).
Posted by nosuspicious 2 years ago Report
Another meal for Madeleine! I love how you write her interactions with other women. They really flesh out her personality and prove so many opportunities for your devious sense of humor to shine.
I think the mouth and belly play here was some of the strongest you’ve ever written. The way Kathy and Madeleine giggle over his suffering inside Madeleine’s belly is so hot..
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Aww thank you <3 I was a little worried I was too on-the-nose with some of Madeleine's humour with the other two women, if it was a bit too brazen or not, so I'm glad you liked it~
Yeah this one had a more mouth-play than usual. Normally the focus is on her tongue licking at the prey's dick until he cums, but for this story the focus was more on his fear than sexual gratification, hence more mouth-play. Poor guy didn't even get to cum in her belly~
Posted by aj1994314 2 years ago Report
I absolutely loved the inclusion of the post-vore conversation/dinner with Kathy, I feel like that could turn into a whole thing by itself! Incredible work, as always! Your ability to bring life to characters never ceases to amaze me!
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Aww thank you <3
Kathy was a lot of fun to write, and it's very possible she might pop up again in a future Madeleine story~
Posted by ShinjiIkari 2 years ago Report
The prey still looks like chocolate if you squit your eyes :^)
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Funny how all men look like food items when I squint enough~
Posted by ShinjiIkari 2 years ago Report
Better stop talking like that, those kind of women get nothing for Christmas... I'm sure! :<
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
I'll just need to make my own present then!
*Opens box* "Get in..."
Posted by bronzelara 2 years ago Report
Very hot and arousing story about a very sexy and hungry woman and maybe another future pred too in her receptionist
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Mhmm yep, Madeleine is slowly awakening more preds to their appetite~
Posted by Luffredd 2 years ago Report
I've never been much for macro/micro before, but these story's are great. Probably because of the cruelty and great details :)
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Oh thank you <3
The cruelty angle is so fun to write, coming up with various ways for her to torment her prey as she revels in their terror~
Posted by WalP 2 years ago Report
incredible story! this is my exact type of content and there's never enough of it. i'd love to feel as terrified as Damien in a hot pred's bowels
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Thanks <3 And yeah there's not many stories that focus on the fear/terror angle of it, which is a shame as it's such a powerful dom/sub vibe.
Posted by WalP 2 years ago Report
this story is honestly one of my favorites i've ever read. the tags align perfectly with my vore niche (f/m macro/micro human pred/prey unwilling fatal digestion and disposal) and you have legitimate literary talent. great stuff
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Oh that's flattering to hear, thank you.
If you check my gallery you'll find a few more Madeleine stories. I don't think she's quite as cruel in them as she is in this, she's been building up to this, but she still revels in her dominance.