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What's the saying? Never mess wit ha person who has nothing left to lose?
After feeling free to renounce her faith the cow was finall able to focus on the children that pushed her over the edge.

Little did she know, when one door closes, another one opens somewhere else. She just had to go to the lowest point in the world to find it.

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And so it was Maha the war priest came to be! The ending was going to be completely different on the first draft:

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Maha was going to stage a raid on her family's barn, and after a heated horn clash turned into an ushi oni,
but decided to keep the conflict more spiritual and modern.

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At least this time it didn't take an entire month, only half of one! Finally have a villain of gluttony.
Thank you all who read the other 3 parts.

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And YES, I deliberately kept it to 4 parts since apparently cows have four chambers to their guts. And with that said~ let me know how I did for a finale!

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chuunda

Posted by chuunda 3 years ago Report

Loved the anal vore part and the entire character arc you created for Maha. Slightly sad to see it end after 4 chapters but I enjoyed the conclusion. Would love to see you come back to this world if the inspiration hits, but am also excited for any other stories you may create!

Indighost

Posted by Indighost 3 years ago Report

Fun story, love it! I really enjoyed how the story covered all parts of the character's life and changes: work, family, body etc. Well done!

Welcometocave

Posted by Welcometocave 3 years ago Report

Finally got around to reading it. Great story!