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A weight has now been lifted~

Get your magnifying glasses at the ready, it was a lot to cram into one page given Flash removed my ability to create buttons and slideshows. This is her shortened Lore, squeezed down to the most relevant bits and distributed to you by The Order..

"I know of the first one.. She came from Fairview, the town that was once her home.

Hers is a story of many moons of suffering in which she turned to her Father for support, but found only hostility in her darkest hour.." - Enrico Faust,

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Crazycat15

Posted by Crazycat15 3 years ago Report

Nice <3

lXlNeMiSiSlXl

Posted by lXlNeMiSiSlXl 3 years ago Report

Thanks!~

somethingsomething2077

Posted by somethingsomething2077 3 years ago Report

Id like to be with her as a friend of course

lXlNeMiSiSlXl

Posted by lXlNeMiSiSlXl 3 years ago Report

:3

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

Wonderful

lXlNeMiSiSlXl

Posted by lXlNeMiSiSlXl 3 years ago Report

Thanks!~

geoshark12

Posted by geoshark12 3 years ago Report

Yikes what a backstory
And it seems she has some duality going on

lXlNeMiSiSlXl

Posted by lXlNeMiSiSlXl 3 years ago Report

Most if not all of my Demons will have tragedy in their backstories since that's typically how people become Demons in my lore~

What do you mean by duality?

geoshark12

Posted by geoshark12 3 years ago Report

Ok maybe duality isn’t the right word, more even though shes a man eating demon she seems to have retained the kindness part of her personality in some capacity

Going off of her other names ( specifically “the mother”) it seems like shes the one who i would assume acts kind or motherly to new female demons

And based on the fact that survival of an encounter seems to be appealing to empathy / sympathy ( or pity if those other two are too strong a word)

I am actually really interested in seeing (or reading ) more about the world this is set up in

lXlNeMiSiSlXl

Posted by lXlNeMiSiSlXl 3 years ago Report

Oh I get what you mean, now.

Jaz is simultaneously one of the most dangerous and escapable Demons in the Underground. Canonically remnants of her Human life have spilled into her Demon one as she was known to be a genuinely kind person before she was Tainted.

You're also right about her other names. Jaz sees all the new Demonesses as her own daughters, even though they obviously aren't biological. She knows this, but it plays back to her strong relationship with her Human Mom. So she cares for her Demons in a sense that she aspires to be just like her own Mom was.

As mentioned here surviving an encounter with Jaz heavily depends on circumstance, which is why her Survival rate hinges at a 50/50 point and she remains very dangerous. To expand on that, people who try too hard to show empathy towards her or details of their own suffering will likely be eaten because she has a very refined eye when it comes to emotion, so she can see through deception. Succeeding though, she won't go out of her way to help her would-be prey, but she will let them go.

It's great to hear from someone who's interested in my characters beyond just the fetish side of my world!~ It's a nice dopamine surge for me!

geoshark12

Posted by geoshark12 3 years ago Report

yeah that makes sense, I'm now wondering what happens ( if anything) to those who get away and she finds out later there story was bullcrap

ngl I do enjoy the fetish side of things but its far more interesting when weaved in with lore and world building and gives off a sense of " in what kind of world would this happen" and for me when i heard sunken asylum ( major darksouls vibes in the name ngl) it made me wonder just what else is down there


also the way you wrote the survival report gives off a bit of a feeling that theirs more to it and that the people writing it are not necessarily the "good guys"

lXlNeMiSiSlXl

Posted by lXlNeMiSiSlXl 3 years ago Report

That's just as simple as instantly devoured if they were to meet again~

The Sunken Asylum is the main stronghold of the Demons, I'm unfamiliar with Dark Souls honestly, I named it that because it's literally a sunken asylum.

You'd also be right there, The Order are 'questionable' even though their goal is to see the world back to normal, they make some sketchy decisions from time to time.

geoshark12

Posted by geoshark12 3 years ago Report

just the way it sounded was similar. keep the awesome work

lXlNeMiSiSlXl

Posted by lXlNeMiSiSlXl 3 years ago Report

<3

SuperSentaiVelvet

Posted by SuperSentaiVelvet 2 years ago Report

Man, and I almost thought Jaz was just some evil monster, but now she has some tragedy to it.

lXlNeMiSiSlXl

Posted by lXlNeMiSiSlXl 2 years ago Report

The mostly hidden aspect of my characters.. A lot of them have suffered a lot as it is kinda a requirement to become a Demon.

SuperSentaiVelvet

Posted by SuperSentaiVelvet 2 years ago Report

Yeesh. Makes me afraid of being her friend, because I'm just food to her. Almost like asserting dominance via vore.

lXlNeMiSiSlXl

Posted by lXlNeMiSiSlXl 2 years ago Report

Not entirely.. She can spare people, and has within the lore.

SuperSentaiVelvet

Posted by SuperSentaiVelvet 2 years ago Report

That's good.