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This non-vore piece is a bit outside my usual wheelhouse, but I was inspired by SenorIncognito's (https://www.deviantart.com/senorincognito69 ) Reversion Syndrome transformation stories, and had to write my own take on one, which I figured I'd post here for completeness, and for anyone else who enjoys this sort of TF. SenorIncognito was kind enough to declare it canonical, and to do some light editing on this one, which I appreciate.
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Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report
great story the i feel bad for luna
Posted by Groblek 3 years ago Report
Yeah, the Reversion Syndrome setting is one that’s decidedly unfair to the people born controlling the bodies that eventually reverse.
Posted by Omnomplus 3 years ago Report
the ")" should be outside the link in the description
Posted by Groblek 3 years ago Report
Fixed, thanks!
Posted by LemonBarb 3 years ago Report
Honestly, having a look. I now can't help but loosely think of what would happen, if a woman ended up Pussy TFing, or enjoying the Reversion Syndrome of more than one permament 'body' part. But it'd probably b be a stray thought of if a pussy, or any bodypart contained the minds, or 'souls' of multiple transformed/absorbed people. (Pretty crowded, or risk of gestaltation?)
Posted by Skullhammer123 3 years ago Report
This is a really interesting setting, great work on this story! Though I have to ask, after the transformation, are Luna and Kitty able to talk to each other in their mind or is it just through physical reactions?
Posted by Groblek 3 years ago Report
From my read of SenorIncognito’s other Reversion Syndrome stories, it’s not clear, so I’m going to say that these two get to communicate mentally until someone tells me otherwise.
Posted by Skullhammer123 3 years ago Report
You know going back, im actually not a fan of how Bess handled that. She didn't give Luna any time to process that she had this or even say goodbye to her other friends and family, I mean Kitty had been holding back since high school when she woke up, im sure she could've held back a little longer. It actually almost felt like Bess was trading her in for someone she liked better.
Also, would love to see a sequel that has Luna dealing with the aftermath of her transformation, like maybe being resentful at first then slowly coming to accept/enjoy it by the end.
Posted by FutanariPrincess 3 years ago Report
Depressing, but such is normal for Reversion Syndrome, where you basically die before the body does... For someone suicidal they might like the idea of being reversed at first only to realize that their consciousness still exists but in a fate worse than death, so even then... I can't see a situation which would be positive psychologically, as well as dealing with the questions the scenario has to Plurality. At the same time it is close to inanimate TF, which if the victim keeps consciousness has same but different problems. Different in the fact that Genital TF has sensations of something happening to it as well as sometimes being able to interact with the brain's consciousness like a Plural Headmate, Inanimate TF is just plain a fate worse than death as you perceive but cannot act.