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Tenshi Shiranui, a young Borrower, sneaks into the home of the apparently infamous Mr. Fleur in search of food, but while navigating the daunting maze of the manor, Tenshi soon learns that she'll be the one to become food, as the enormous and cruel Fleur captures her, in search of a midnight snack of his own...
New story time! My bestie Shyny and I did a really fun RP a while back and I got indulged in my new pred OC Mr. Fleur devouring girls again, it's put me in quite a mood...
I've actually fleshed out a few extra details about Fleur's character, not in this story but in general, his full name is Claude Fleur, and it is hinted at in both stories I've done with him so far that he isn't quite human. I've kept his true nature a secret though, so basically whatever kind of ravenous monster you think he is, that's up to your imagination~
Personally I headcanoned him as being part Fae, but still it's up to the reader's interpretation.
Edit: changed the title, was originally "Carnassier de Fleur," but one of my commenters corrected me with a more accurate title so I changed it to "Fleur le Carnassier," which means "Fleur the predator" in French, it fits much better I think~
Shyny's userpage: https://aryion.com/g4/user/Shyny
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Posted by Totallyoriginalusername 3 years ago Report
To be precise, the title translates to Predator of Fleur, you could change it to Fleur Carnassier, giving Fleur the adjective of predator in a subtle way. Or you could put Fleur le Carnassier, which translates to Fleur the predator
Posted by minakotomoka14 3 years ago Report
Oooh thanks for the tip! I'm not well-versed in French at all so I tried my best, I might change it up to match your suggestion, I quite like the title of "Fleur le Carnassier" hehe
Posted by Totallyoriginalusername 3 years ago Report
Glad to help out! And tbh french isn't the easiest language to write in
Posted by pendingdeletg34fg252 3 years ago Report
OH MAN, this was a really good read! We need more older male preds out there, for sure
Posted by minakotomoka14 3 years ago Report
Ahhh thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yeah I found that older male preds were definitely a lacking niche, so I wanted to try some for myself~
Posted by pendingdeletg34fg252 3 years ago Report
Np! I’m really liking this OC ngl, I hope to see more with him!
Posted by minakotomoka14 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you like Mr. Fleur, I do hope to write more with him in the future~
I do have another story with him btw, it is a same size story tho so fair warning if that isn't your thing, it's called Maid to Fill and it's also in my M/F gallery~
Posted by pendingdeletg34fg252 3 years ago Report
That was actually the first one I read, haha! I like it too! ^w^
Posted by minakotomoka14 3 years ago Report
Aww thank you so much!