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The final part to the Case of the Catnapper arc. Jonathan continues to find ways to torture and murder his captive nekos, confident that nothing will stop him for his crimes. However, he overlooked one 'little' detail...
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Posted by Nalzindar 3 years ago Report
Wow, talk about plot twist!
I thought this would end in five chapters, but this seems like the beginning of another adventure/drama. Was there something in the digestive acid that made the cat girl grow back or is the amulet not working properly? It did seem to malfunction when Peter was the target.
By the way, in the paragraph where Jonathan was shrunken there isn't any mention of the nekos returning to their original size, they just appear big when he crawls out of his clothes.
A bit gory and messy but highly deserved end for the villain (if he stays dead XD ). At least the girls still loves Peter, and he certainly could have fared worse, maybe if his unfortunate attempts with the fair sex of brownies continues, he can visit Caramel at the brothel instead ;P
Posted by DrakentheBlack 3 years ago Report
I have a bad habit of keeping my stories going for a while X3
Having defeated this villain and thus completed the arc though, I'm going to dedicate more time to other stories for the time being.
With Leilah, I will simply say I wasn't ready to kill off someone else's OC, just yet...
And for Peter, the Amulet might have worked on him, if it was the thing that had cursed and shrunk him in the first place.
I'm pretty sure I mentioned it takes Jonathan a few minutes to crawl out of his clothes. I figured it would be rather needless to actually take the time to explain Peter freeing and growing the nekos when it was pretty obvious that was where things were going.
And don't worry. Things might get better for Peter, possibly...