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This particular chapter of the Peace Keepers saga takes place before all others. Susan and Mila have not had any engagement with 'Jojo' the catnapper. They have not taken Peter into their home. The pair of nekos are not even officially partners yet. This story happens shortly after the events of The Three Tails, where even though Mila wants to be a Peace Keeper, she is not so keen on how things operate. Maybe Susan can straighten her out, or maybe Mila's rebellious behavior will be exactly what it takes to bring down a criminal which the older neko has been unable to do alone...
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Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report
This was a fantastic chapter, I loved it from start to end : )
I highly enjoyed the way you started the story with a crime scene, then jumped to an unnamed neko being taken to and devoured by a lewd tentacle worm, very nice. And then the neko turned out to be Mila on an investigation along with Susan, which turned out to be 100% success and saving the other girls.
I also find the idea of having some people in this world, interested in (and aroused by) vore, a fascinating concept. Some people have developed interests in seeing other creatures devoured alive beside from the mere function of having them as snack or food.
Mongo's trademark appearance (seemingly out of nowhere), also made me grin, "You are never going to see him again" yeah, right XD
Then they went on an a dramatic and trilling chase to solve the first crime presented in your story.
Thumbs up for this one :D
Posted by DrakentheBlack 2 years ago Report
Thank you :)
With the willing prey Sonja has gotten to eat, not to mention the new program that was established to let prey find their desired predators, I'd say quite a few people are into vore in this world!
Yep, there was like for the idea of this snake being a reoccurring character, so I was sure to make him one!
I also wanted to emulate some of the formula shown in various crime shows with this series, given its theme and all.