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Why Fight When We Can Talk By 0nl1ce -- Report

Hope your all doing well and getting ready for 2/27/2022. While I'm tired of doing pokemon content for now, I will still be making stories which you can check my stories for the future in my blog. Also if you have not already, go vote for one of the three OCs I made for an OC story I plan on making soon or suggestions for an OC.

This was a request from Bellyl0ver who was fixated on Pyrrha being willing prey which was honestly difficult. I usually try to make my stories match the character to the best I can and with Pyrrha, she is more likely to prioritize a mission than give into secret sexual fantasies. So Belly and I came up with an idea to find a loophole and made an OC. So comments are appreciated and hope you enjoy.

So if this works out, would it be called JNMR or JRMN? So fun fact, Malva is short for malvada, the feminine spanish word for wicked and last name is a mix of words from chinese that make "forked tongue". Since RWBY bases characters off of stories, I chose one of the Aesop Fables with the donkey, snake and immortality. This also inspired Malva's semblance and she does have a donkey faunus sister named Poca.

Once again comments are appreciated and hope you enjoy!

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6hideri6

Posted by 6hideri6 3 years ago Report


This story was quite entertaining, yes I could enjoy it more than I imagined

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 3 years ago Report

Interesting, but that’s certainly an extremely overwhelming semblance to essentially persuade someone into being prey in maybe 5 minutes at most.

0nl1ce

Posted by 0nl1ce 3 years ago Report

Wwll i didn’t make this semblance too carelessly. Basically she needs to have an actual conversation that leaves an impression. If she was in a normal conversation, it would not take effect. It has to have oomph on the target like embarrassing them or infuriating them.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 3 years ago Report

I guess that might neuter it slightly, but just embarrassment or infuriating someone can be done very easily, even just by asking inappropriate questions or something similar to the effect, especially to hormonal teenagers. Maybe limit it to a strong emotion that can build off of a memory? Like you mentioned with the Grimm having eaten Pyrrha at one point. That way she can’t just walk up to a random girl and ask her about say the last time she got laid and then tell her to jump down her throat. It would make her have to either work over her targets or hunt for someone with particular experiences

0nl1ce

Posted by 0nl1ce 3 years ago Report

Thats what i mean by oumph, it needs to really hit home.

Apostolos

Posted by Apostolos 3 years ago Report

Ah i understand now, just hope she’s not the only RWBY pred or that it’s no definite timeline in this series, I don’t think it’ll work as well as the pokémon one with that limitation

0nl1ce

Posted by 0nl1ce 3 years ago Report

Shes not.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 3 years ago Report

I think that you did a pretty good job in making a scenario where Pyrrha ended up in that role. As for the 27th, I’m just hoping not to sleep in and miss the live premiere of the Pokemon Presents. I absolutely think we are getting PLA DLC and Gen 9 announced tomorrow.

Bellyl0ver

Posted by Bellyl0ver 2 years ago Report

I always love coming back to this. You did a great job characterizing Pyrrha and her letting go of inhibitions to fulfill a secret fetish.

0nl1ce

Posted by 0nl1ce 2 years ago Report

Flad to hear that people are going back and looking at my stories. I try to stay true to the characters to the best i can.

Bellyl0ver

Posted by Bellyl0ver 2 years ago Report

Thanks once again for indulging in one of my various brain rots.