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https://tastyace.itch.io/the-ultimate-eaters-sauna-a-valentines-vacation-demo
Content warning: This 18+ Twine contains polyamory, foodplay, bedroom roleplay, and LOTS of vore (oral, anal, and cock, as well as unbirthing) This is a game for adults. All characters are at or above the age of consent. Do not play if you are not an adult.
You win a Valentine's getaway at a vorey sauna! The question is: which predator do you want to invite as your plus one~? Choose from femdom, fantasy roleplay, foodplay, and fearplay to find your perfect, kinky night in this bite-sized holiday tale!
To play the full game, become a patron at https://patreon.com/tastyace/ .
Want me to make a Twine like this one for you? Send me a PM on FurAffinity ( https://www.furaffinity.net/user/tastyace/ ) or aryion ( https://aryion.com/g4/user/TastyAce ); contact me on Discord at TastyAce#6678, message me on Twitter at https://twitter.com/ace_tasty , or email me at tastyacebusinessATgmail.com . If you support me on Patreon, you can also DM me there: https://www.patreon.com/tastyace . My TOS is here: https://tastyace.carrd.co/#commissioninfoandtos .
Thanks for playing! <3
https://tastyace.itch.io/the-ultimate-eaters-sauna-a-valentines-vacation-demo
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Posted by TanookiBoy12 3 years ago Report
Ohhhh now this I HAVE to check out!
Posted by TastyAce 3 years ago Report
Thanks! Hope you enjoyed the project. <3
Posted by TanookiBoy12 3 years ago Report
Oh I didn't really read that it was for Patrons, oops
Posted by Hansony 3 years ago Report
eeh, ofcause we only have the demo to go by but text adventure games where you don't really have any choice in the story feels dull to me...
I feel like the point of making it a text adventure and not just a written story is that the player can get to influence where the story goes but with your story here the only choice the player have is what kind of vore they want to partake in, there is no "willing/unwilling/reluctant" paths, no real choice.
The story it self and your writing seems fine, probably would have enjoyed reading it as a part of a series where we actually have an introduction to the characters in one story and this as a follow up with the choice either put as separate uploads for each pred or as "read from here" parts further down the same page.
So as a summary, your writing is good and enjoyable but the rigidness of the story you are telling here don't work well as a game in my opinion atleast not from what is in the demo
Posted by TastyAce 3 years ago Report
Thanks for playing! I'm glad you like the writing and enjoyed the story that you got to experience. As for your points regarding the gameplay, I do understand your qualms. I did plan to have more of an open-world direction in this title--letting the player walk through the sauna and find different kinky scenes as a result--but my health crisis ( https://aryion.com/g4/blog.php?id=63796 ) prevented me from fulfilling that idea, and I had to scale back quite a bit from the planned development path. I do want to put at least some small exploration elements in this month's game ( https://aryion.com/g4/view/763267 )--though I can't promise a huge project given my current situation, I want to expand my reach, even in a small way, and try some fun things I think players will enjoy.
I am pretty confused by you asking for "separate uploads" and "read from here" parts. Are you suggesting I make a different game for each predator's path? I truly don't understand, sorry; if you could clarify your meaning I'd really appreciate it.
I'm also curious by your closing words, mainly that "the rigidness of the story you are telling here don't work well as a game". In your opinion, what kind of story does work well as a (vore/kink) game? To be 100% clear, I'm genuinely not trying to be defensive at all; I'm honestly curious about what you mean by that and love hearing what a "good game" is for people, especially in the world of vorey text experiences.
Thanks again for giving the project a fair shake, and I look forward to your reply. All the best!
Posted by Indighost 3 years ago Report
To improve readability, i'd lower the font size, use more bullets or paragraph breaks, and use more contrasting colors
Posted by TastyAce 3 years ago Report
I'm a bit confused by this comment for a number of reasons. Let me explain.
First of all, the font size point. I make it big-ish normally to avoid readability issues, and I'd rather it be too large than too small. (I know either way that one can just use their browser's zoom function to fix those things, but still. I don't want players squinting at their screen.) However, I have had times where a font size that's fine in one browser is a bit too large in another; I try to watch out for those things now, but it does still happen occasionally. So maybe that is the case here? If not, what font size do you suggest?
Second, you want me to use . . . bullet points? In a prose-based game? Why? I genuinely don't understand that suggestion; if you could explain your meaning, I'd appreciate it.
Finally, *where* should I use more contrasting colors? In the fonts? The backgrounds? What issues do you have with the color palette and this release, and how do you suggest I change my approach?
In summary: without specifics, I cannot implement meaningful change in future releases. Your reply is too vague for me to fully understand. If you could please tell me your issues clearly, I can improve upcoming titles.
Posted by Indighost 3 years ago Report
>what font size do you suggest?
A lower one, around 20 point. The font is so huge that the lines break too much and the text feels jumbled and there isn't enough text for a clear idea on each line.
>Why use bullet points
The description of the npcs confused me. i had to click on the name of the current npc to view the next npc, but it felt like choose an unwanted npc. If there are multiple options in a game and there are no graphics, it's clearer to show the options with bullets of some kind.
Pink on white and white on pink are hard to read (yes, even on this page here!) because pink is a color that is close to white chromatically. Try black on white, blue on white, white on blue, or light grey on dark grey (That's what discord uses).
Posted by DamnedFox 2 years ago Report
Hey a little late but I came across this post. Will the full game ever be released to public or no?
Posted by TastyAce 2 years ago Report
It is available exclusively on my Patreon, and the full version will not have a public release.
Posted by DamnedFox 2 years ago Report
Okay! Understood c: