Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

This is great . In The previous “fun with girlfriend “ . I said that Alice felt like a stranger who gabi was gonna eat. Simply because she felt so generic compared to all the other times we had seen her. However here. In this story alive came into her own perfectly . Like she actually felt like Emily’s girlfriend again.

Alice is definitely an audience insert. There’s nothing wrong with that . As it’s a subtle way of showing that you read the comments. I love how she kept pointing out things most people would point out.

Though I find the twist that she doesn’t like cruelty surprising, it makes me really wanna see how she will react when she finds out the truth. Especially given she doesn’t like adding kids to the mix . And gabi’s killed a lot of them. It’s made even worse when you realize how many people have died not due to doing something wrong but due to Emily being cruel. It could definitely become a sore spot in their relationship. Since alice rightfully views it as a weird fetish. So this could be the shock that effects her heavily.

Stuff like that makes it clear to me why Emily is careful about when she will tell Alice . Though gabi being more than a bit of an asshole the entire time , is harsh. She intentionally said something she knew would trigger her sister , her treatment of those poor people she ate other than the first guy , and then her jokingly trying to force Emily to tell Alice before she was ready by letting Alice see her. Those are all massive dick moves .

Anyways , alice is definitely shaping up to be one of my favorites . Jill is still the best because she’s evil and accepts it. But alice is definitely coming in third or maybe second

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

I don't see Gabi as cruel but definitely Emily in the past comics Jill and Jenny they are kinda cruel Because Jill in many of the comics is cruel to alot of people and Jenny tried to eat Lily and Emily can be cruel as we have seen in past comics. I get why Alice hates cruelty because it can get messed up at times Gabi can have lack of empathy if she gets put in a tight spot and Gabi could have spared Teddy and Brandon because in Fun in Hotel and Fun with girlfriend they both were on friendly terms with Gabi and Emily but something went wrong and they both got eaten in their respective stories. My point being Gabi can be messed up at times but she is a good person at heart. Also i agree with you doomed Emily has to be careful what she tells Alice and Gabi doing all those things you said could cause their parents to see Alice as a threat and they might try to have Gabi eat Alice that would make Emily hate all three of them forever plus Emily does say in the first Fun with girlfriend the she was gonna tell Gabi about what she thought of her Mom's rule of no witnesses that rule in my opinion is messed up because that means anyone who looks at Gabi wrong or touches her bad is gonna get eaten along with many others some who never even saw her. So Alice is also one of my favorites too along with Gabi and Emily. Jill is my second pick because she's the only one who's so mysterious as we don't much about her past before she became a babysitter for Samantha.

Posted by doomed 3 years ago Report

See here’s the thing. I don’t see Gabi as a good person at heart . She wants to be one sure . But the reality is , she’s a predator who can feel empathy.

That said , she wants to eat these people . She enjoys feeling them struggle , she enjoys them dying.
She regularly eats the pizza Guys and she eats people over the absolute most trivial things. Though sometimes it’s a valid reason the large amount of bystanders who died isn’t justifiable.

Also you’re right relatively speaking we barely know anything about Jill

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

While i agree that Gabi does want to eat people sometimes she doesn't always want to like in Fun in halloween she nor Emily knew that the candy was drugged and this led to several innocent people being eaten heck Emily almost got eaten if she was not quick to lock Gabi in the room. Also i think Gabi is could be a good person if she didn't eat people i mean i would love to be friends with Gabi and Emily but not Jill or Samantha because Jill is really sadistic and Samantha will eat anyone if they disagree with her and Gabi and Emily's parents morals are kinda messed up they love their daughters but their love has blinded them to the fact that they have literally killed hundreds maybe thousands of people without remorse. All criticism aside Gabi could be a good person at heart if two things happened 1. they see if the vore ability she has is a rare thing that only some people have and 2. if Gabi was to tell her brain no everytime she gets the urge to eat people like in Fun in Uni she tried her best to fight the urge but lost the willpower because she got scared that her secret was found out.

Posted by ArsonAverage 3 years ago Report

Gabi isn't a goos person. You just listed legit every reason why.

Posted by ArsonAverage 3 years ago Report

She has murdered kids because her sister asked her to. That is not a good person in the damn slightest

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

She was tricked though because in Fun with Friends Emily tricked Gabi into eating her friends and then lied to her parents by saying Gabi did it intentionally and she got Gabi in trouble. Gabi may not be innocent of eating people but she still has a conscience and she can control herself because she is still a human with emotions and compassion towards others. It shows that you can't judge a book by its cover because she has made mistakes but she does try to stop herself from repeating those mistakes in a lot of the stories/comics.

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

What i mean is she loves her friends, family and she does try to show people mercy by not being mean to them before she eats them if Gabi was a true monster she would eat her family and friends with no compassion or mercy.

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

Plus never once has there been a Uncaring Pred in the stories with Gabi in them she has compassion towards people. If she was Uncaring she would be like Jill or Jenny someone who doesn't give a damn about a person's life in the slightest and just sees people as food. I see Jill as what Gabi could have become if she didn't have empathy.

Posted by TheWitness 3 years ago Report

I agree with you, in a lot of stories, it's Gabi who represents a gun and Emily is the one who pulls the trigger. Although there are stories where Gabi is alone and eats people in those stories, I don't blame her at all for reacting like that because her whole life has been educated and manipulated that way. "You reap what you sow" I think is the saying

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

If i met Gabi, Emily, Jill or Samantha i would stay as far away from Emily as humanly possible because she is a master trickster Jill is just fucking scary and Samantha is not one to upset because that equals death Gabi to me is nice but she needs to stop with the whole eating people thing by putting a rubber band on her wrist and snapping it hard when she gets hungry for people or she just doesn't listen to Emily when she tries to trick her. The mind is a powerful tool it's what you do with it that matters is what i would tell Gabi.

Posted by TheWitness 3 years ago Report

And a detail, it turns out that with the pred that you have more probabilities of surviving is with Samantha, at least from my point of view. Reasons? Make friends with her, help her feed on hundreds of people, hide behind her when she uses her vacuum suction, don't call her a monster and not at all, really NOT AT ALL! tell her that she can eat you

Even so, it does not remove the fact that Sam can eat you, here are the chances of surviving, I repeat, from my point of view:
Samantha: 80%
Gaby: 50%
Jenny: 5%
Jill: 5%

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

For me Gabi would be a 60% to 70% survival rate if you don't upset her, touch her boobs or offer her alcohol because she becomes unaware and may eat you without knowing. I agree with what you said about Samantha putting her at 80% survival rate because she is nice as long as you don't tell she can eat you or calling her a monster that i agree with.
I would put Jill and Jenny at 1 to 2% survival rate best to stay away from them at all costs because they are smart and can trick you into letting your guard down and then going for the kill so if you see them FUCKING RUN AWAY AS FAST AS YOU CAN.

Posted by TheWitness 3 years ago Report

Lol Who has a better chance of surviving, a GTA npc or a person from the Gabi & Emily universe?

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

Someone could survive in the Gabi and Emily universe if they stayed in the woods far away from the city and the country because Gabi, Emily, Jill and Samantha all live in the city while Jenny lives in the country so if you wanna survive go off grid in the woods and have plenty of guns, ammo, self defense training, food, water, bear traps in case of bears and outdoor knowledge like what plants are safe, what animals to watch out for and most importantly NEVER invite anyone to your tent or cabin because it may be Gabi and Emily, Jill, Samantha or Jenny. That's my opinion if you want to survive.

Posted by TheWitness 3 years ago Report

I don't know why but I imagine an open world video game like GTA or Watch Dogs but set in the Gabi & Emily universe, where you can use Gabi or another of the girls and you can eat people but be careful that you don't see doing it because that's when the police levels start. And before you say, no, I'm not high XD

Posted by ArsonAverage 3 years ago Report

I don't think u understood what I said. She murders people and carea nothing about them. Not about how their families are effected unless she kills them to. Vore is murder, I accept that and yeah it can be hot but there is no beating around the bush. She is a physcopath who eats people :l there is no amount of "oh she carea about her family" that can change that when she eats hundreds of people and doesn't bat an eye. If someone cat calls her then she will legit murder them for it. Period, no pred is a good person. This goes for all vore

Posted by Vorelover23 3 years ago Report

What about the unwilling preds? Those that were forced into eating others, either by the prey being forced into their throat without any training to cough them up, teleport gone wrong, Drop-catching (where the prey literally trips, tackles wrong, falls onto the predator’ mouth) or eating them hypnotized by another? As far as I see Gabi, She has her moments of spite and miasma, true, but all this started when her parents taught her “no witnesses” and literally had her eat those who wandered by before she could do that on her own. Try looking back on all the gabi comics and stories you can. I will say, half the time, Gabi is outright panicking, defensive, or regretful.

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

All of the unwilling preds are innocent because the ones who made them eat people are the guilty ones Gabi is innocent sometimes but not all the time her parents should have never taught her no witnesses because that makes her parents outright murderers. Gabi does eat people with no regrets only if they insulted her, touched her boobs or and this is important harmed her family or friends in any way but besides that she is a caring person.

Posted by ArsonAverage 3 years ago Report

It has been shown multiple times she can spit up people. And it shows her parents are just as much at fault as she is. Everyone in the damn family is evil as shit

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

That is true but Jill and Jenny are worse then Gabi because they play the lost girl card or the helpful card and then they eat their rescuers like in Staying for Dinner Jenny offered to help Lily and almost ate her if Gabi had not showed up in time but i do agree that they are evil because like you said vore is murder and i am surprised that the police or fbi have not put them in jail or sent them to the most dangerous place on earth but i guess the law enforcement is like the one in the Five Nights At Freddy's universe they don't look into the disappearances.

Posted by ArchLinux 3 years ago Report

in witch stories gaby throw up people

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

Fun in the Concert but past that i don't know.

Posted by ArsonAverage 3 years ago Report

She has gotten a lot more cruel recently. She eats people for making cat calls, hitting on her, she legit said she PURPOSELY showed her tits to delivery drivers to have the excuse of eating them. She is becoming a worse person with every single issue.

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

I agree that Gabi has gotten more cruel because she is cruel to the pizza delivery boys and to any delivery drivers like you said. I mean the cat calls and hitting on her are basically deaths on a silver platter for anyone who does that and if I was a delivery driver I would quit my job and leave the town if I saw Gabi because the delivery drivers never back away quickly, get in their car and leave they just stand there which gets them eaten because they see Gabi's boobs and they just become a statue and don't realize she is gonna eat them until its too late. If the delivery drivers want to live they should have cars that have a robot arm that delivers the food and they can drive away without going to the door and getting eaten.

Posted by TheWitness 3 years ago Report

Plot twist: Gabi & Emily's universe is the same universe as Five Nights at Freddy's.

Jokes aside, I have a theory that the more you try to suppress hunger the stronger it becomes, making people not care at all, all they want is to be able to satiate that hunger at all costs. Clear examples are Samantha and Jenny, Jill is still a mystery and in Gabi's case it turns out to be the most peculiar and complex.

Posted by TheWitness 3 years ago Report

It makes sense what you say about Emily, I can bet Emily hasn't said anything to Alice for fear of how she'll react and not in the sense that she'll freak out, I'm pretty sure Alice will be excited that vore is real, more like Alice seeing Emily as the real psycho and abandoning her, Alice is smart and is able to connect the dots on why Emily doesn't have any friends and why so many kids at her school go missing.

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

Yeah because like you said Emily has no friends except for Alice because she tricks Gabi into eating them if Gabi wants to truly be a good at heart person she needs to control herself by eating vegetables cause on the wiki it's said she is a vegetarian and i mean she needs to eat A LOT of vegetables to fight the craving to eat people.

Posted by TheWitness 3 years ago Report

Emily likes preds who are always hungry, Alice likes mass vore, I wondered how the two of them would react when they meet Samantha, surely they will want to have a polyamorous relationship with her although Sam will have no idea about that XD

Posted by Runbot 3 years ago Report

Yeah i can see Emily and Alice having a friendship with Samantha but nothing else but that.

Posted by TheWitness 3 years ago Report

I am a viewer of the yuri genre, it is difficult not to imagine something else :3

Posted by HalfDime 3 years ago Report

A story within a story about a story being storied?

Insert meta joke here.

Posted by Trex4 3 years ago Report

Man this is so wholesome

Posted by CoolKaios 3 years ago Report

I think the more interesting aspect is Alice and the tension if she figures out Gabi and Emily's "secret".

Alice seems like a level-headed kid, with a kink. But does display uncomfortably toward vore in real life. The dramatic irony being actual vore beings are right in front of her.

If I were to hazard a guess I'd say Alice will find out Gabi vore's people, but will become cool with it. Thus adding to the little "tribe" of charecters in the "know".

Personally though I think that would be a little weak. For one thing it would contradict the families "no witnesses" rule. They could make an exception because she's Emily's girlfriend (which I susspect will be the case)

But this leads to me second point. Emily needs o loose something dear to her. Up till this point she has been watching actual people get eaten with little regard or consequence. Gabi at the very least does display remorse.

So I think one of two things should happen
1) Alice finds out the "secret" and Gabi does eat her.
2) Alice finds out the "secret" and while the family spares her Alice cuts ties with Emily.

I think either case would actually give some consequence to the proceedings. The Parents are complicit in everything but are only protecting their daughters. Gabi is somewhat compelled by her appetite, but Emily literally has no justifiable reason for her cruelty. So I think she's the one with the most room for character growth.

Either way I think Kattu and all involved are extremely talented and though I have my opinions I ultimately respect their artistic vision.

Posted by kattu 3 years ago Report

Thank you so much for your comment! And thank you for giving your point of view on this situation. I hope that what I'm preparing will be interested nonetheless.

Posted by CoolKaios 3 years ago Report

Im glad :)
Whatever the case I hope you continue to do what you love.

Sorry for the "longer" comment I thought it would be formatted shorter lol

Posted by Beigewall01 3 months ago Report

You know, is it just me or does Alice seem surprisingly chill with Emily being alright with them writing smut about someone blatantly based on Gabi? Granted, Alice may have just been around Emily enough to disregard Emily’s pseudo-incestuous tendencies towards Gabi, but you’d think there’d be more of a reaction. Also I love how Alice acts as the voice of reason in this, while unaware that her girlfriend’s friends and family members are capable of vore.