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Newton's journey continues, free of the cougar, he must consider how he is to escape the feline city, unknown dangers in all directions for weeks of travel with little promise of food or water, a concrete desert. But maybe there's anouther way.
I hope the ending to this piece isn't too abrupt. I had to break this section in two, and this was a lot more natural than my other options. As is normally the case, what I thought would be one chapter turned out, much longer than expected
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Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report
Losing those tools is unfortunate, given how hard he worked for them...but it was cool hearing that things are changing for the game mice.
Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Posted by DrakeZephyr 3 years ago Report
Indeed. I toyed with having him keep them, but... he wouldn't have been allowed to have them in the cage, and writing the scene became difficult... I think he would have not gone into their, care, if it lost him his tools, or, possibly lost them. And events will mean if they kept his tools he'd lose them. Having an opportunist think, yep, he's not needing these anymore, felt more natural a way for him to lose them, while... touching on the idea I suppose that, in the end the mice don't always have the luxury of, leaving behind anouther mouse's things
Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report
I mean, it's the natural outcome; these are basically Mad Max resource rules, you take what you can get if it'll help you survive the hostile environment.
Posted by Littledude 3 years ago Report
Seems almost too good to be true.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 3 years ago Report
I think you'd know a thing or two about, too good to be true situations for mice. Time would tell.