Uploaded: 3 years ago
Views: 8,823
File size: 55.90 KiB
MIME Type: application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document
Comments: 10
Favorites: 31
Tags: ?/F Alicorn Anal Vore Applejack Applejack Prey Big Belly Big Butt Bones Bones in scat Cruel Digestion Disposal Earth Pony Earth Pony Prey F/F Fart Farting farting pred Fatal Female Fluttershy Fluttershy Prey Furry Furry Pred furry prey Gas Gassy Gassy Pred Implied Spike Implied Starlight Glimmer Knight Mares Lux mane 6 Mare Mare Predator Mare prey Multiple Preds Multiple Preys My Little Pony Onyx Pegasus Pegasus prey Pinkie Pie Pinkie Pie Prey Pony Pony Predator Pony Prey Post-Vore Potbelly public disposal public vore Rainbow Dash Rainbow Dash Prey Rarity rarity prey riley Same Size Scat Scat pile Scat Play Scat Torture shitting on Skull skull in scat Spike Starlight Glimmer Stomach Noises taunting taunting pred teasing teasing about digestion Teasing about disposal Teasing Pred Twilight Sparkle twilight sparkle prey Unicorn unicorn pred Unwilling Unwilling Prey Weight Gain Willing Pred Willing prey
The mane six all receive a friendship mission to travel to help ponies living in the small village of Friesian Meadows! Will the girls figure out the strange mysteries of the rural community? Or will they become a part of the town as stinky, permanent residents?
An absolutely delightful, exciting, and kinky stinky commission for Dimalad introducing the Knight Mares, a group of my OC ponies looking to shake things up in Equestria ;3
Riley, Onyx, Cinnamon, Knight Sky, Winter Breeze, Lux, Violet Glow, Candy, and Thaddeus Threadmane are all OC owned by me :3
Friesian Meadows is an OC location owned by me :3
The thumbnail art was created by the incredibly talented Hurb as a reward for
Dimalad and you can see the full image in all of its glory here~: https://aryion.com/g4/view/767583
The rest of the characters and places in this story are not owned by me, and are from 'My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'.
Hope you enjoy~ <3
Please login to post a comment.
Posted by Dimalad 3 years ago Report
Thank you soooo much Pancake!! I honestly can't recommend you more <3 Please Consider commissioning Pancake! He's so talented, patient, kind and open minded!
Thank you once again for the art Hurb! Its gonna help everyone see how the Preds look <3 Here is a link to the artwork! https://aryion.com/g4/view/767583
So hopefully you all enjoy the story!! Its been so fun working on it with Pancake <3 Any questians about it please leave them below and I would love to answer them for you <3 This isn't the last we'll see of the Knightmares ;) In fact my next commission from Pancake with have his twin knightmares OC'S Knight Sky and Winter Breeze! Here is the artwork that it will be based off <3 https://www.furaffinity.net/view/46476105/
Thank you once again Pancake and Hurb! Both incredible people and deserving of support<3<3
Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report
Was an absolute joy to bring to life! Looking forward to our next wonderful tale <3
Posted by zeno 3 years ago Report
What are use of these number ?
Posted by Dimalad 3 years ago Report
The numbers are chapters to show that the focus of a particular section has shifted. An example would be for chapter 1, three mane 6 members find out that the map wants them to fix a friendship problem in this location, chapter 2 shows them at the location, then another example would be chapter 7 with Riley showing how she deals with calming Applejack down and talking her into dying essentially then chapter 8 swaps to how Lux is dealing with Rarity. Hopefully that makes sense <3
Posted by Qizenma27 3 years ago Report
This was a mighty load of storytelling and it was filled with messy, cruel, and delightful humor. And I enjoy reading it. The story was what I expected to happen and seem it was more than I imagined as well. It was quite a thrill to see the mane6 interacting with the knightmares and how much a huge term of events for both sides. I had fun reading as each character are true to their behaviors, most of the time, and realizing their motives. Chapter 1 was longer than I thought it would be and I will be waiting for chapter 2.
Also, great job to all artists who worked on this story and thank you Dimalad for alerting me about it.(〃ﾟ3ﾟ〃)
Posted by Dimalad 3 years ago Report
Glad you liked it <3 It was a lot of fun to see Pancake turn it into something special for me :) We already have the plan for chapter 2 ready! Just need to get art for it, plus I've got another 3 story's to come first and potentially even more xd Plus Pancake has other commissions to work on before getting back to me <3 I'll be sure to drop you a message when we get around to continuing this story <3 Thank you for the message! I really appreciate it and I'm sure pancake feels the same <3 <3
Posted by PancakeBebop 3 years ago Report
So so happy to hear you enjoyed the story! Thanks for your kind words <3 look forward to more pony content soon ;3
Posted by gauro5 3 years ago Report
wouldn't it be better if ponies were in human form ?
Posted by Dimalad 3 years ago Report
It depends on your tastes. I personally prefer Ponies, Animals, Furry's. Basically anything that isn't a human, I just find Humans to be a little boring and vanilla. You can like what you like and I won't judge anyone as my tastes aren't exactly normal but I wouldn't change that about me just like I'm sure you are perfectly comfortable with your own tastes <3 I'm pretty much only gonna commission ponies for the foreseeable future as they are my favorites <3 If you have any available funds them I would recommend commissioning your own story from one of the many talented writers on the site Like Pancake here, checking out random stories is great but there is nothing better than turning one of your own ideas into a story <3<3 Have a great day <3