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Ashley is stuck at home on a sweltering hot afternoon, having lots of studying to do. For lunch, she is having a Vortex menu consisting of a hamburger, fries, and shrunken people. But it soon turns out that one of the tinies is a bit different from the others. He actually wants her to eat him…
This is an erotic story that was written for mature adults with a sexual preference for vorarephilia. It contains depictions of physical and psychological cruelty that some people may find disturbing. Minors and people who feel that such depictions upset them are therefore explicitly asked not to read this story. Moreover, this story is entirely fictional and all characters are at least 18 years old.
Tags: Aware, Casual, Cruel, Crush, Digestion, Disposal, F/fm, Fatal, Hard Vore, Human, New World Order, Shrinking, Soft Vore, Unwilling, Willing, Violent
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Posted by Krauser 2 years ago Report
Awesome as usual. For some reason I've always enjoyed dialogue between predator and prey whether its taunting or reassuring. Have you ever considered the idea of vortex serving people in bigger sizes? Might have some potential for interesting situations between predator and prey.
Posted by gaze9991 2 years ago Report
I like this idea. It would be very interesting to see interactions with larger tinies.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
Thank you! Yeah, I also don't know what it is that makes dialogue between the pred and the prey so appealing. Probably something about the power dynamics; on the one hand there is this human interaction between them, on the other hand one is food for the other.
As for different sizes, it's something I've considered, but I'm not sure what to do with the idea yet. The future will tell :D
Posted by kbDArt 1 year ago Report
I like the current sizing - at somewhere between a half inch and inch - easy for swallowing lots of them. If I were you Vortex, I’d keep this the regular size and perhaps do a one-off story where they are sized larger for ‘premium’ boxes, going no bigger than 2 or 3 inches. Anything larger than that would be potentially dangerous to the consumer and even a fictional corporation would be wary of lawsuits. Another good option, if you want to permanently go to a bigger size, would be to cite increased demand or supply issues or even simply production cost issues to justify the company upsizing their ‘food’, so there the boxes would have the same amount of mass edibles, but less of them.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 1 year ago Report
Yeah, I agree. I prefer the current size for a variety of reasons. It allows for more tinies to be eaten, and it makes unaware situations more plausible too. Plus, while I know that "realism" isn't really a good criterion to judge vore scenarios, most people struggle to swallow any object bigger than an inch whole without practice. And it would only get even more difficult when that object is actively fighting against being eaten, too. Some people like it when the pred has to put up a fight, but I prefer it when they effortlessly dominate their prey.
(And thanks for all the favourites! <3)
Posted by akinata 2 years ago Report
well written.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by Veriden 2 years ago Report
I love lurneing a a little about each one before they get eaten. It makes the indifference that much more evil
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
It does have a very particular effect, and it's this playful indifference on the pred's end that I find extremely appealing in vore :D
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 2 years ago Report
This is spectacular! Love all the behind stories of the poor tinies before them being digested XD Since Megan Sanders, all those little ones’ tragic back stories did not disappoint! Makes everything more impactful indeed!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
Thank you very much! Yes, I noticed that I hadn't used these "tiny biographies" for a while now and wanted to bring them back. It's just a little thing that adds a lot to the emotional effect when they get eaten.
Posted by MrDave 2 years ago Report
I really like your idea to put an extra story of the mentioned tiny in "Matter of principles" chronologically before that story - I had to re-read the story just to imagine that Brian is already then a part of the beautiful features of the girls body described! :)
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
Thank you! I enjoyed writing this for the same reason you mentioned, it's quite enticing to think that Brian is nothing but a part of Ashley by the time of "An American Nightmare" and "A Matter of Principle".
Posted by Sidlin 2 years ago Report
As I've said before, I really love the way you describe Brian's vorephile thoughts and the way he deals with his mixed emotions while approaching his moment of being eaten, literally. This is one of my favourite works from you, and is a splendid very well written piece like all your work so far ^_^
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
Thank you so much for your review! I'd been meaning to engage in this thought experiment for a while now, a sort of "be careful what you wish for" scenario. It's not easy to write this in a somewhat plausible way, so I hope that it doesn't come across as all too contrived. I really appreciate your continued feedback and support, Sidlin.
Posted by Sidlin 2 years ago Report
Hahaha talking of vorephiles within your VF universe, it made me wonder what giantess vore related video studios would be like knowing that they have real life tiny people to order on demand instead of using green screens, cgi, and gummy bears ^_^
Posted by Sidlin 2 years ago Report
And no problem! ;)
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
That actually is one of the ideas I have for another story. I guess live action vore videos would look a bit different in this universe, given that the studios wouldn't have to work with SFX or props ;)