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Facing a new day in captivity, Christina and the other shrunken people soon find themselves struggling for their very survival once again. Meanwhile, Tanja is getting ready for a fun evening at a local night club, planning to bring along some special little treats for herself and the girls…
This is an erotic story that was written for mature adults with a sexual preference for vorarephilia. It contains depictions of physical and psychological cruelty that some people may find disturbing. Minors and people who feel that such depictions upset them are therefore explicitly asked not to read this story. Moreover, this story is entirely fictional and all characters are at least 18 years old.
Tags: Aware, Casual, Cruel, Crush, Digestion, Disposal, F/fm, Fatal, Hard Vore, Human, Insertion, New World Order, Shrinking, Soft Vore, Unwilling, Violent
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Posted by amerdism 3 years ago Report
Feel bad for Christina and Marina at the end there, honestly thought Josephine was gonna let Marina survive for a bit there.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
The tinies do get put through a lot in this one. Unfortunately for them, I just enjoy writing vore that is really unfair. And in Marina's case, I also had to wrap up the story. So she had to go :(
Posted by amerdism 3 years ago Report
Yeah your really good at it to be honest, most of your stories really pull on the heartstrings, kinda wish for a happy ending every so often though. Maybe you’ll do a story with a good ending for the tinies in the future, and or a story about someone like Tanja and her friends getting their comeuppance, honestly her friends disregard for the tinies and even derision of them as just food is kind of worse than Tanja, in a way, who still acknowledges them as people at least. Where as everyone else is totally uncaring.
Posted by amerdism 3 years ago Report
By the way, is there like a page where the vortex world and how it works are written down? I thought only criminals became tinies not everyone who doesn’t contribute to society. Also there all this talk of tinies going out of fate and stuff and how they have to be eaten to die or something.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
Thank you! I am aiming for an emotional impact, so I'm glad that it does pull on the heartstrings ;) It's fairly unlikely that I'll write a happy ending for the tinies, though I wouldn't say it's completely out of the question either. At least some of them might get spared the fate of the others eventually - we shall see!
As for how the Vortex world works, it's hinted at throughout various stories, but there isn't any text or so that deals exclusive with that question. I am working on a couple of stories that will address this topic in more depth, though, so there will be more information in the future.
Posted by amerdism 3 years ago Report
Shame, with how good you are at tugging on the heart it would of been nice to see a happy ending story some time soon.
Nice to know you’ll be fleshing out the world, cause honestly this story and it’s predecessor kinda brought up a ton of questions, cause tanja kept tinies for weeks and didn’t swem
To need to feed or take care of them in anyway, and considering her friends are so convinced they’re food and one implied they don’t go out of date like normal food but stay fresh until eaten it leave a lot of questions open as to what the whole shrinking process actually does. Thought it could easily be said you don’t add that stuff to these types of stories and I wouldn’t have questioned it if this story didn’t bring up the kind of questions I just mentioned.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
We shall see :) The scenario itself doesn't preclude the possibility that there are people around who are the polar opposite of Tanja, people who keep tinies safe and protect them. It is hinted at in some of the other stories, but ultimately, I currently just lack the time and resources to explore that particular side of this world.
Tanja does feed Christina and Thomas in "A Helping Hand", and you are right, it's safe to assume that she does have to take care of the tinies she keeps around, at least in a very basic sort of way. It's not explicitly mentioned, but she does.
Posted by muslone 3 years ago Report
As always you brought forth a masterpiece in this story. You have a way of brining your stories to life.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
Thank you so much! Glad to hear that you enjoyed the story! :)
Posted by Veriden 3 years ago Report
It is inevitable that one of these girls who enjoy eating tinies will find themselves shrunk too. It is just a matter of being in the wrong place at the wrong time.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
There actually is a certain logic to who gets shrunken down and who doesn't, though that will be addressed in an upcoming story :)
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 3 years ago Report
Ah, the man of culture. You are back. So hyped to see your writings again!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
I wasn't really gone, just unable to write as much as I wanted to :) Hope you enjoy this story!
Posted by MrDave 2 years ago Report
Again a very lovely story and i like how you brin the side-characters in :)
Have you ever got the idea, that one of the friends in the group got finally swallowed for the enjoyment of the pred? For example Tanja eating side-charcter Jessica and than seduce her boyfriend while digesting her? :)
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
Thanks! Yes, including a few side characters always is fun and gives some variety, though I also have to be careful not to get bogged down in too many secondary events.
As for the scenario you mentioned, role reversal is not my cup of tea personally, and there actually is an in-universe logic to who gets shrunken down and who doesn't, which will be elaborated on in future stories. This means that something like that is very unlikely to happen. I prefer preds to be preds and prey to be prey :)
Posted by CorruptedBiology 2 years ago Report
I've been gradually reading the stories set in this universe and I reckon this is the best of them.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
Thank you for the comment! :) Always love to hear from people which story is their personal favourite.