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Hannah returns to her home in the Midwest to spend Christmas with her family. To tide herself over until their traditional Christmas Eve dinner, she decides to snack on some cookies and Vortex tinies, unaware that one of the shrunken people is an old friend of hers...
This is an erotic story that was written for mature adults with a sexual preference for vorarephilia. It contains depictions of physical and psychological cruelty that some people may find disturbing. Minors and people who feel that such depictions upset them are therefore explicitly asked not to read this story. Moreover, this story is entirely fictional and all characters are at least 18 years old.
Tags: Aware, Casual, Cruel, Digestion, Disposal, F/fm, Fatal, Hard Vore, Human, Insertion, New World Order, Shrinking, Soft Vore, Unwilling, Violent, Unaware
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Posted by Littledude 3 years ago Report
A welcome change from the usual mass apathey. Loved the insertion.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Decided to try something new here :)
Posted by AlbertKwon9182 3 years ago Report
Love the Christmas setting! It was a lot of fun to see Hannah again in this story. Pretty cool thing that Hannah's philosophy toward tinies is evolving from punishing the criminals to sorting out the weaklings off of the world haha.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
Thanks! Hannah being a somewhat conflicted character makes writing about her quite interesting as well, and this definitely won't be the last we see of her ;)
Posted by vorefanatic314 3 years ago Report
More Hannah is always a treat!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
She seems to be building up a fanbase of her own :D
Posted by vorefanatic314 3 years ago Report
For good reason, her rational and excitement at putting tinies in their place is commendable. This was a great story, definitely looking forward to seeing more of her and anything else you have in store! Hope you had a merry Christmas as well!
Posted by Veriden 3 years ago Report
took me three trys to get to the end. wonderful work
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
I'll take that as a compliment ;)
Posted by Veriden 3 years ago Report
it 100% is
Posted by Veriden 3 years ago Report
Just reread all of your English ones. Top tier absolute masterpieces. Love the world, love the people, love the style, all of it. keep it up!
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
Thank you! :) I'm currently not writing much due to health issues, but will get back to it once I feel a bit better again.
Posted by MrDave 3 years ago Report
I really like the situation, where Arthur sees the naked body of Hannah and got sexually attracted to her, despite knowing he will become a part of that sexy body.
Next story? :)
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this story as well :) As for the next story, it's out on Patreon as of now and will go public in a week!
Posted by broccoli125 2 years ago Report
"Arty had not really been an evil person like that terrorist Paige, but people like him were just too weak to survive in this harsh, big world." This line surprised me a bit; seems like a sudden change in character. I guess the surprise also comes from how I expected a different continuation to her self-justification, which is basically what you get if you delete that sentence.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
Thanks for the comment! That is intentional; Hannah is "moving the goalposts" here. Deep down, she knows that Arthur really doesn't match the "dangerous criminal/terrorist" criteria, so she simply changes the justification for her actions. Her true motivation is that she simply enjoys what she is doing, but that doesn't match her self-image, and so she lies to herself. The lies themselves are fairly interchangeable.
Posted by broccoli125 2 years ago Report
I guess another reason it felt surprising to me is that I didn't expect that Hannah would feel confident that Arthur wasn't a "dangerous criminal/terrorist". Plausible, depending on what happened in the past (including how many of the other tinies she found to be not that bad), but not obvious.
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
Well, she knows him quite well and they used to be friends, so Hannah can be quite certain that that wasn't the reason for him being shrunken down. Even she doesn't really buy that in his case, and so she needs to come up with another reason for herself. The fact that she can make that switch so quickly and despite another part of her clearly feeling regret about what she is doing is what makes her particularly dangerous compared to the other preds in my stories.