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Jealousy blooms in Esmond after he secretly watched his friend eaten (but not digested) by his adoptive dragoness mother. He decides to make his wishes known, that he too harbours a desire to pass through her guts, and to know her as more than just a mother, but as a man does a woman.
This is follow up to A Birthday Wish which you can read here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/764812
This was a commission for anonymous. My queue remains open, but involves a lengthy wait. If any readers think they might be interested then please get in touch via PM/comments or on Discord (BunnyWrites#4146).
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Posted by VictorBound 2 years ago Report
I really liked this one, especially the internal bits, with the surprise guest/meal he got to enjoy at the end. XD
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Thanks <3
Given the commissioner wanted the full-tour experience, but Esmond couldn't be digested, I thought it'd be fun if instead we got an up close and personal view of another prey being digested instead~
Posted by Destroyah23 2 years ago Report
Can't wait for the sequel, I'm a sucker for dragoness human relationships. Hopefully we'll see more of the latter half of the chapter between Esmond and Merideth
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Probably going to be a while before the sequel, as I want to give my other commissioners some time, but yeah it should be fun, and should have a lot more emotional development between the two of them~
Posted by nosuspicious 2 years ago Report
Such a wonderful and fitting next chapter for their story, I loved it! I think my favorite bits were the mouth play with Meredith growing more into teasing and jerking off her “son” before swallowing him and all the internal moments with the adventurer she eats later. Sending her down to be fucked by Esmond was awesome, that was all so well written, funny, and super hot.
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
It was fun having the two of them in the stomach together, I don't think I've had multiple prey like that since my very first story. Poor Esmond though, being dominated by another meal in Meredith's stomach~
Posted by nosuspicious 2 years ago Report
I’d still say he got the less shitty end of the deal
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Lol yep.
Posted by ShinjiIkari 2 years ago Report
I loved that part too. You made her end very humiliating though, how nice, one self insert for every gender~
Loved how she went from devote to forceful. People in distress are so exciting.
I wonder how it'll go on with Garrick, I doubt he wants to stay forever and play little happy incestuous family with them. What I loved the most about this story is, again, your setting of the World and surroundings. It makes me really wanna wander these ruins and go questing, even if there wasn't a hot dragoness that would eat me whole. Thanks for sharing!
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
I'm glad you're enjoying it~ And yeah with Garrick I don't know either yet. He wasn't in the original story brief. I added him to chapter 1 as a way to build up to Esmond's eventual first "full-tour" experience. Commissioner was a big fan, and his role has expanded since then. Lots of fun options head~
Posted by magicboy13 2 years ago Report
The second chapter is exactly what I was hoping for! And I wasn't expecting Esmond's surprise stomach sex. XD Now THAT was awesome.
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Aww that's very kind thank you. I was worried the second chapter wouldn't live up to the first, especially after such a long wait for it. And yeah stomach sex is great, it should be in more stories~
Posted by Rogueplayerone 9 months ago Report
Would love to see part three very invested in the story
Posted by BunnyWrites 9 months ago Report
I'm hoping to come back to this someday, the commissioner was still interested, I've just been going through a bit of a writing block phase. But thanks for the interest, it's always a nice motivator to hear <3