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Toby's intrigue for vore turns into obsession, wondering if this fantasy could actually be real.

Having tracked down two incredible women online, his desperate search leads him down a dark dangerous path. One that could turn into a rather uncompromising situation.



This rather self-indulgent fantasy story was inspired by two wonderful friends on here, who I've had the pleasure to know for some time now.
 FluffyLizardFunTime and  AlisaBlueBird

Both of which write incredibly delightful erotic tales of wonder. Which, if you haven't done so already, I suggest taking a read.

As always I would love to hear your comments, and I really hope you enjoy this rather long work of... fiction. ;)

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doomed

Posted by doomed 3 months ago Report

Holy shit you’re back !!!

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 months ago Report

Hey doomed - yeah, sorry for the withdrawal - was probably needed. This story started a while ago, and is now finished- finally!. :) I'm working on my commission backlog now... so hopefully, more to come soon!

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 months ago Report

Never apologize for a well needed break

doomed

Posted by doomed 3 months ago Report

That story was awesome, Jane is the perfect counter to Rey. Rey being evil and Jane mischievous, I’m glad things ended mutually

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 months ago Report

Awww - thank you! They are both awesome predators :)

Andris

Posted by Andris 3 months ago Report

This was brilliant Hawkeye. 10/10

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 months ago Report

Hey - thank you! I'm really not sure it's 10/10 - but appreciate your comments! :)

dcvfgb1234

Posted by dcvfgb1234 3 months ago Report

Another good one.
I'm generally not into AV. Don't mind it, but it generally doesn't do anything for me. Your stories tend to be good enough to actually be something i enjoy, though (and so does Alisas. You two are some of the only AV creators i'll read). And this one was no exception. Now, I wouldn't have minded some more detailed digestion and some disposal, perhaps Dean coming back out.
But the story was good and enj9yable.


Did Alisa and Fluffy write parts? Felt like there had been multiple writers at times, at least.

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 months ago Report

Thanks for the comments. Is heartwarming to hear you liked the story, even if AV isn't your thing. <beam>
I know I kept this one clean, a lot go for that side, others prefer the more descriptive disposal
of things - which is also fine.

This one was all me, I didn't ask Alisa or Fluffy to help out, although they both knew I was doing it, and were kind enough to let me reference them as characters in it.

The reason for the different styles was probably because of the time it has taken to finish. I started this ages ago, and in between other writing... writing it all out of sequence, from what you read now... only returning to it now, as time and life have allowed.

dcvfgb1234

Posted by dcvfgb1234 3 months ago Report

Oh, so it actually was Alisa and Fluffy appearing in the story. Curious.

And yeah, you generally, as mentioned, manage to catch my attention.
Heck, one time I even got up at 3 AM while reading the story to device some equations for the size difference between pred and prey. I only do that very rarely.