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(Just reuploaded this since the first time the story wasn't viewable in my browser - sorry to anyone who saw that, looks like it was a file format issue.)
No one ever said life as a mercenary was easy, but when going up against a group of them famed for always getting the job done, Shez and her captain find out just how ruthless the so-called "Ashen Demon" can be to anyone standing in her way.
I'm a big Fire Emblem fan, especially of the most recent titles, and seeing a recent artwork by MotherofMonsters (https://aryion.com/g4/view/795576) inspired me to write this! I've been meaning for a while to start uploading vore stories to the site, and thought a short piece like this could be a good way to dip my toes in. Three Hopes is a lot of fun so far, and it and 3 Houses have a cast full of characters ripe to be put in vore scenarios. (I just commissioned MoM for one of these, in fact!)
While my idea was to end this in an ambiguous way so it could theoretically fit in a more vorish take on canon, I'm likely to upload a separate version with two different, extended endings - one where each of the two protagonists ends up digested.
Comments are welcome! If you have any other characters or ideas you'd like to see, feel free to mention.
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Posted by Deegdumdoodilly 2 years ago Report
I’m slightly out of frame cheering for Shez the entire time and utterly sobbing when she doesn’t win
Posted by RadiantRia 2 years ago Report
At least she might pull it off in one alternate ending ????
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Just tried Three Hopes and all If say is...
If I did a take on that. Divided between Shez having not just her mind, but soul churned by Byleth and Sophis. Alongside Avral, that tried to bar the full digestion by say, a "sleeping predator"?
Eh, I'll see if my muse is strong enough on prologue hue, here
Posted by hunter1243 2 years ago Report
Cut to her getting stomped and gurgled again.
Posted by BlueMarvel611 2 years ago Report
I'm honestly intrigued with what you plan for your series of FE Heroes fanfictions. Especially given how Shez would be either the pred or prey given the outcome. Personally, I think that you made a good choice with female Byleth as the dominant pred that she is. Not to mention you seemed to get Shez's character rather right on this one.
You really did it good with describing on how Byleth ate her meals and how Shez reacted towards such a sight. Though I DID have one thing about it as it's how Shez's captain Berling was no where in Byleth's stomach when Shez herself was eaten. Wondered if Byleth has a VERY strong digestive system. That's just my nitpick.
Anyways good job and I can't wait to see how you do with your other outcomes. Laters!
Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel
Posted by RadiantRia 2 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I'd intended the implication to be that Shez's captain was already partially digested in the stomach, but I can see how I should have given more detail there and made it something Shez could have seen. Glad you enjoyed, though!
Posted by BlueMarvel611 2 years ago Report
Yeah thanks for the response. I hoped to see more of your work in the future too. Laters.
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Honestly, I could pull of an Attack on Titan reference when it comes to digestive horror, for a mercenary. But if in contrast to the Ashen Demon...
It's like a Lu But fight. But in this case, you're merely a worthwhile combat snack.
Posted by MotherOfMonsters 2 years ago Report
Gosh I'm a sucker for this sort of thing. Super fun, thank you!
Posted by DeliciousReya 3 months ago Report
Now having seen the first chapter of Three Hopes, I adore this story <3 This is incredibly good stuff!!