Posted by elliotalien08 2 years ago Report

Oh? Usually you mention they get removed from the throne (unless im completely blind) stil this gargantuan story is absolutely amazing!! I loved it

Posted by Makazawa 2 years ago Report

Dam I really like a nurse pred part, also very good job again

Posted by Spyash2 2 years ago Report

This was a joy to read.
It's a shame there was no Altera here though. She would've made perfect prey/predator material here.

Posted by BubblyPolka 2 years ago Report

fantastic work as always

Posted by kaibaman 2 years ago Report

That last part with Fou was incredible. I would never imagine Fou as Pred.
Now I wish to see that part in a pic espcially the belch part.

Posted by Deviantfan16 2 years ago Report

Ok I'm gonna say what I enjoyed first. I thought it was neat to see Shuten Douji in the epilogue and Bunnytoria as the final boss was cool. Nightingale was also suitably scary. Its pretty well written in terms of description and I liked some of the inclusions. The turn around with Fou was pretty funny.

However thats where my praise ends cause.....I honestly find both using monsters as preds and wiping from the throne for no reason to be pretty disgusting and a little dumb.

Like why do they have random monsters eat the losers? Wouldn't the ones running the casinos want to eat their debtors themselves? It kind of just seems like they are their just because and I find monsters as preds to really be a turn off honestly especially when there are better preds readily available. Its not like these monsters even matter since they have no personality to them or depth beyond being an arbitrary punishment for those who lose.

As well, wiping the prey from the Throne doesn't help at all. Getting removed has only happened twice which is why its such a terrible thing. Here, it ignores all the rules and feels contrived. The point is to stop the singularity, that's enough of a problem. You don't need to add perma death too. In fact, itd be smarter for the casinos to let them be resummoned so they can come back for more. After all, that'd mean getting more tokens and money. Heck even just let them hijack the Servant's summoning afterwards to make them work for you afterwards.

The throne wipe also kinda goes directly against the comedic tone of the event this is based on and makes it unnecessarily morbid. Especially since in game, only two servants have ever been wiped and both were as Heroic Sacrifices. No one has ever inflicted it on a Servant and yet these random dime a dozen monsters can easily do so just because of a Casino?

Also just a slight nitpick but why didnt Fou just make Bunnytoria get rid of the Singularity to fix everything? That was the point of trying to beat her and yet he just eats her. Even if I overlook the eating thing (Fou is too cute to be mad at), he probably should of made her do that as the victor before nomming her.

Posted by Draconatedz 2 years ago Report

tl;dr and also Nasu personally gave us permission to do all of this, so if you have a problem, take it up with him :)

Posted by Deviantfan16 2 years ago Report

-_- sure he did. And he gave me permission to take it up with you

Posted by Draconatedz 2 years ago Report

My uncle Nasu would be sad to see you blemishing his good word like that.

Posted by Deviantfan16 2 years ago Report

He has no idea either of us exist

Posted by That1Person 2 years ago Report

I’m gonna be real with you, it’s a vore story, it really isn’t supposed to make compete logical sense. That’s the point.

Posted by Deviantfan16 2 years ago Report

Fair. Its just that it makes even less so then normal and in ways that don't make it better

Posted by Hollowedvessel 2 years ago Report

I really enjoyed this. Are you planning more illustrations in the future? Would love to see thick bunnytoria and mama raikou. Nightingale would be awesome too. Would really like to SEE Ritsuka bite it.

Posted by Hivelord 2 years ago Report

Love your stories, shame you do instant digestions only.

Posted by Gingwas 2 years ago Report

I'd give this a 5 or 6 out of 10. There are parts of this that I liked, there are others that I didn't where iw as blueballed by the monster vore parts, and I think it went on too long, though the pacing helped it a little.
Ultimately, it was a shame that Buntoria and Berserker Jalter got eaten.

Posted by algog8 2 years ago Report

For a seccond I thought lip would win and get forced into the staff role of swallowing everyone instead.

"Please dont lose! Im still too full!"

Posted by NinjaKillingKnight 2 years ago Report

Actually greatest vore story ever written. Seriously the variety of preds, the twists and turns the finale was so fantastic too! It just kept going and going and I never wanted it to end! Absolutely astoundingly amazing.