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Tags: Absorption brutal burning burning alive Digestion Digestion Noises Disposal F/F Fart Farting Fatal Female Female Pred Female Prey fire fire breath Fire breathing Oral Vore Power absorption Same Size Scat snuff superhero superhero pred Superheroine superpowers supervillain supervillain prey Supervillainess Swallowed Swallowing Swallowing whole waitress waitress prey
"BREAKING REPORT: This is Caroline Byrne of the Channel Five News. We've just had a report that a vicious supervillain attack near the city centre has left twelve people dead. The villain in question was dispatched by a local C-class superhero. The families of the deceased are expected to receive a hefty bill to repair the property damage.
Moving on to more important news, the four-o'clock bus was several minutes late today..."
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Last week, my Patrons picked Superheroes in A Vore World: Unmoved by Cries for Mercy as their choice to get an alternate ending. Well, I ended up feeling so inspired, I wrote two endings, a good one and a bad one!
I had to change the title slight, since there's a character limit on titles now, apparently.
If you're interested in checking out the original, you can read it here! https://aryion.com/g4/view/719424
If you're interested in reading the other alternate ending, you can read it here! https://aryion.com/g4/view/801237
This month of Patreon, I have a new short story out. "The Circle of Life" is the story of a predator learning that she might not be as dominant as she thought... If you're interested you can read it on Patreon right now!: https://www.patreon.com/posts/68866613
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Posted by gauro5 2 years ago Report
So an alternative ending
their is saying
you become what you eat
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Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report
If that's true, than I'd be ass.
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Posted by KyngSama 2 years ago Report
LOVED IT
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Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report
Thank you!
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Posted by Whymanamajeff 2 years ago Report
Such a good story, loved every word!
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Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report
Thanks!
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Posted by VigorousJazzHands 2 years ago Report
Love this and the Good alternative ending. As usual, very well written by working in the already established vanity of the hero character and using it as the hinge that makes both possible outcomes feel plausible and natural.
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Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report
I appreciate hearing that! I wasn't so sure about this one, but I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Posted by TsuIsBored 2 years ago Report
This felt very similar to Hoemlander's Attitude
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Posted by PeachyKawaii 1 year ago Report
This is truly an amazing story, and I'm overjoyed to have stumbled upon it. Stories about power absorption and, especially, fire breathing are a rarity, which makes this one exceptionally special. Thank you for brightening my day!
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