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The Circle of Life By Vesari -- Report

A predator learns that she might not be as dominant as she thought...

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Personally, I identify with Riley a lot in this story.

A short story this month on Patreon as well. In "The Lamia's Embrace", a young and inexperienced adventurer takes on a dangerous enemy... If you're interested you can read it on Patreon right now!: https://www.patreon.com/posts/68866613

Thumnail art by "muchin"; https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/98741010

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Matanuiv

Posted by Matanuiv 2 years ago Report

And so the cycle continues. ...maybe? Love an open ending like that. Also, not sure if anyone else is having this issue, but the image link isn't working for me. Getting a 403 error.

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

Fixed the link!

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Matanuiv

Posted by Matanuiv 2 years ago Report

Much appreaciated! Gonna reiterate, loved the story! Would almost like to see more of Riley-Brynn...

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blankuser935

Posted by blankuser935 2 years ago Report

This was really nice <3 Well written, good length, content, and strangely wholesome? Would love to see more along these lines in future!

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33defence

Posted by 33defence 2 years ago Report

Love it~ Would enjoy a continuation, but I know some people prefer it more open ended~

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

A continuation would basically be the same thing again with changed names, I think.

Love your PFP, btw!

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33defence

Posted by 33defence 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I've had it for years, but it's still a good'un. Your Stories have been great, btw. Can't wait for more~ I liked this one especially though because role reversal is always 10/10

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Bod67

Posted by Bod67 2 years ago Report

I like to think that if she ha just taken her home the first night, none of this would have happened and Riley would just be another prey.

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

Mmm, perhaps!

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feauxen

Posted by feauxen 2 years ago Report

Very nice. As a rule I’ve never been fond of harsh preds, but you consistently manage to create exceptions to that rule. That takes some real talent.

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Sukamera

Posted by Sukamera 2 years ago Report

This was a loving and beautiful story.

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

That’s a curious question. I tend to listen to music streams on Youtube when I write, so I probably listening to to the Lofi girl.

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Sira

Posted by Sira 2 years ago Report

This was very sexy <3 Loved it!

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Moonsniper

Posted by Moonsniper 1 year ago Report

Is this a sequel to the substitute teacher story

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