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< u >; Perhaps I rushed too much to make this one but I was feeling eager.
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Posted by mosena 2 years ago Report
Another banger. Love taunting by shitting out someone's friend in front of them. And the mindbreaking! Mmm, so good. I see a good future in store for Anna, a good slave for her kitsune master.
I was like you my first month of writing and rushed out stories because inspiration came like crazy.
I would recommend breaking up some of the paragraphs and dialogue. Big blocks of text can be intimidating and hard to read.
Posted by Shikari 2 years ago Report
Am glad you enjoyed! ^ ^
It's another guilty pleasure of mine. Mindbreaking and the crushing of one's will is always an a major turn on per say.
And thanks for the tip! I'll try breaking up conversation sequences so it's easier to read next time!
Posted by mosena 2 years ago Report
Love a good mind breaking until they want nothing more than to be a part of their pred and for them to enjoy when they slide out <3.
Posted by tzuya 2 years ago Report
Loved it! Can I have the ref for the thumbnail?
Posted by Shikari 2 years ago Report
Yay~. And the thumbnail is something I personally made ^ ^.
Posted by panzerkampfvorgen 2 years ago Report
This story is quite the work! A girl whos mind is broken upon seeing her bestie shat out right in front of her, followed by the extremely arousing sight of the ultra disrespect of the dead by pissing on the pile......becoming a slave for the sexy floof who ate her friend! So hot!
Posted by Shikari 2 years ago Report
Thank you~ Glad you enjoyed <3
Posted by Quartersnake 2 years ago Report
Very nice to see another piece from you so soon! I don't think I've seen something like this done so well before! Just as mosena said, though, the giant blocks are a bit difficult to read... Good to know you'll be working on that!
Posted by Shikari 2 years ago Report
Oh, really? I'm very much surprised to hear that ^ ^! But yes, I'm going to probably upload another relatively soon as a bit of practice~. Hopefully it won't be too hard to read > <!
Posted by sharky 2 years ago Report
your style is great. I Love having a conversation with prey (before and after digestion)
Posted by Shikari 2 years ago Report
Thank you! I find it to be an interesting concept myself~.
Posted by King05 2 years ago Report
This was fucking hot. So well put together. The kitsune pred was downright sadistic but so hot. AMAZING WORK M8.
Posted by Shikari 2 years ago Report
Sadistic predators are my favorite~! But thank you ^ ^