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This has been a very long time coming, but we're finally here with the first chapter of The Alleycat!

The story begins when Shabina enlists her best friend's help in breaking out of house arrest and leaving town while undercover. But in her rush to escape her circumstances, can Shabina make it past her enemies?

Huge shoutout to an unnamed friend for proofreading this story for me! And also to the denizens of my writing server for enabling me with their support. I appreciate you all very much <3.

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Ssublissive

Posted by Ssublissive 2 years ago Report

The journey begins!

hershey

Posted by hershey 2 years ago Report

You have no idea how tempted I was to end this chapter with a “The End!”. I honestly should have done it.

Rinnicans

Posted by Rinnicans 2 years ago Report

You made it! All in all a really well done travelling sequence, it was clear you put a ton of thought and care into the characters and imagery and it showed! Can't wait to see what you come with with from here <3

Also we're gonna need to have a talk about SFW card games going forward.

hershey

Posted by hershey 2 years ago Report

Thank you! Also no <3

DeliciousReya

Posted by DeliciousReya 2 years ago Report

Incredible stuff here - the anticipation has paid off! (with MORE ANTICIPATION, I'm so excited for this to continue!!) Keep it up!!

hershey

Posted by hershey 2 years ago Report

Thank youuuuuuuuuuu!

phrompy

Posted by phrompy 2 years ago Report

Amazing, I love it! Excellent work, friend, I'm already anxious for the next chapter!

hershey

Posted by hershey 2 years ago Report

Scaredy cat. I know you were going to say that you couldn't wait to devour the next chapter.

phrompy

Posted by phrompy 2 years ago Report

Shaz, we both know that if there's any devouring to be done, It's never me doing it. I'm far too busy being the food.

biscuitman

Posted by biscuitman 2 years ago Report

Really good work, looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

hershey

Posted by hershey 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I do too !

bajillionandone

Posted by bajillionandone 2 years ago Report

Very nice! My favorite part is the burps to the face lol :)

Achille

Posted by Achille 2 years ago Report

I hope the next chapter is all about the geology of Everest exploding.

hershey

Posted by hershey 2 years ago Report

You might just like the piece I'll be posting soon ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)