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Page 17 of the unbirth comic I wrote and CassiSquish illustrated.
And this is where we'll leave them for now. Again, major thanks to CassiSquish for the excellent work on this comic, and for being a lot of fun to collaborate with.
I also want to thank my Patreon supporters and everyone who's bought copies of the comic collaborations that I've published for the past few months, since that's how I can afford to commission artists like Cassi for this sort of thing.
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Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Always remember folks there are seemingly worse fates than digestion. Lmao
Posted by acrylic 2 years ago Report
Oh I didnt know that
Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
I don’t know about that, all three parts of the doctors are going to go on to have fulfilling lives eventually. The pred meant it about the other two making lovely daughters someday, and she’s made sure that what’s left of Doc Margaret will love running an unbirth clinic. Admittedly, the old Margaret might be horrified at the results…. :)
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
At least, until/unless that "old" Margaret ends up feeling empowered. Or at a stretch, tempted over her ability to fully regress a person into an ovum, to maybe start a 'collection' of her own.
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
judging by how this went , i dont think old margret exists anymore
Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
Yes and no - she’s kept a lot of her core personality, but her past self wouldn’t approve the new approach to “helping” people that her new partner’s dedicating their clinic to, or understand quite how single-mindedly focused on the clinic she’s become.
Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
That’s not so likely for this character, “collecting” isn’t really the focus for either this pred or her new partner. If I continue this, you’ll see that the new focus of the clinic will be a combination of “self-improvement” and very unusual fertility treatments. Where the “self improvement” involves doing something like what she just did to the doc to remove problematic personality traits - though her opinion of which traits need removing may not match what the client thinks they want when they come in…
Posted by wiseguy288 2 years ago Report
This is fascinating. First, the echoes of one of the first stories you wrote (and one of the stories that got me to stick around Eka's), but the complete control of the body inside the womb, partioning off pieces of thought into other babies, this has so many possibilities!
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Honestly, looking back. I'd love to see this predator having regressed her partner to the ovum. If not absorbed/merged her with her own womb, alongside a bunch more people. But that's just my bias for wanting to imagine a bloated, 'painfully full' ovaries as a concept. :)
Bar that. I'd probably bet if this predator ended up absorbing her 'mind' for her own, she'd probably end up with a slight hair color shift, 'almost' confusion for her name/self, before humming in predatory satisfaction of being 'one' with a wonderful woman, who'd help her set-up her clinic at a better state.
Posted by Elpie 2 years ago Report
interesting twist on one of your older stories. definitely has a slightly creepier vibe compared to the original, but i really like "deep concept" stuff like this (dunno if that's the right term, i think i just invented it and i'm still waking up as i type this)
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Honestly, deep concept wise. I can just imagine the predator as she's 'imprinting' her own experience/knowledge, is also partially altering her prey's DNA, until her mindset is just perfect for her dreamed/imagined 'partner', whom I'd likely bet could end up being pregnant later, predatory wise.
Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
Yep, that’s pretty much what’s happening in page 14, and the unfortunate Nurse Helen is going to get a lot closer to her boss than she ever wanted when she shows up for work tomorrow.
Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
Yeah, this one’s leaning in to the horror side more than the original story. I tend to go back and forth between creepy vs happier-toned story concepts.
Posted by Elpie 2 years ago Report
i'm much more into the happier ones--i don't like mixing horror with hentai ;)--but this also isn't precisely "scary". like, on the sliding scale between "cute" and "creepy", this one still leans a bit more towards "cute"
Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
Thanks, that’s about where I was aiming with this. I had drafts that leaned more into the creepy/horror side, but decided that I liked it best with a pred who means well, and just happens to have a method that’s terrifying to her victim. But she genuinely believes that she’s making life better for all of Doc Margaret’s aspects.
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Honestly, and this is a bit of a bias when it comes to another one of your stories; "Jealousy", for how a predator could be more creepy. More so if as a twist, instead of 'say', regressing the prey as a trophy. They willilngly integrate all of their beloved's aspects for themselves. With what ego they have being forever trapped within the predator's own being, or ego/self.
Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
That one’s definitely a creepier take on the subject. At some point, I may end up writing the continuation I’d planned when I first wrote it, which was for the pred to attempt to do something along those lines, and find that their prey was slowly possessing them, ending with them being the trapped one.
Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report
Nah, I'd probably say it'd be just as intended, to an ironic manner. Give me a PM on your detailed thoughts, and I'll see if I'd write a take on it. ;)
Or the lens of "the prey thought they took over. But now every time they find some possible new friend. Their possessive prey compels them to unbirth and regress/predate on them entirely."
Or the pred, becomes the 'instinct', that's irreversably intertwined with their beloved, in throbbing hunger/need. Who'd take satisfaction over ruining whatever friendships they would try and have had, just so they can have themselves, in sensation.
Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
I don’t really have more detailed thoughts, which is part of why I never continued the story. That and that I find it hard to be patient enough to give the sort of slow build that I’d want to see for the prey slowly taking over.
I think this is one of those cases that highlights the differences in what you & I prefer in a story, as I can’t say that any of those scenarios you outlined are ones I’d find particularly satisfying. Despite my periodic forays into dark horror, my preference is for something that resembles a happy ending, even if it’s often a decidedly twisted sort of “happy”.
Posted by OmegaGuardian 2 years ago Report
A very interesting comic.
Out of curiosity is there an alternate ending where the doctor was unbirthed and age-regressed into a baby ?
I overall liked it. Nicely done to the artist and the writer of the comic
Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
I didn’t commission any alternate endings, but my earliest script drafts did have the doc turn into a baby along with her new “sisters”. Then I decided to take it in the direction you see here.