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Kiyomi, a clumsy but dirty minded high-school girl finds out people in the school have strangely developed the ability to eat her whole and time resets when she meets a bad end (or good end depending on your view)
I was suffering from writer's block working on my next Perrin bit of work so I created something else to focus on until I get my mojo back.
Let me know what you liked and leave suggestions in the comments.
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Posted by NTTA 2 years ago Report
Tons of potential with this scenario, love it. Could have all kinds of different preds with different attitudes toward eating her.
Posted by PerrintheNeko 2 years ago Report
Yup, whole load of potential preds
Posted by Randomdude5 2 years ago Report
I agree with notitthrowaway. I find this concept interesting, and has a lot of the kinks I like. The story was too short for my liking and felt lacking in detail. I will be looking forward to any sequels this has.
Posted by PerrintheNeko 2 years ago Report
In my defense i wrote half of it at 3AM after a random burst of inspiration, so I'm aware it's not my best in that regard.
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
i love this , i say drag out the dream part a few times so she doesn't immediately understand whats happening.. that or trial and error lol
Posted by PerrintheNeko 2 years ago Report
Oh, i was planning on dragging it out a bit while mixing in a few other vore types to keep it fresh.