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Chapter 16: Submission By Vesari -- Report

Melissa tries to reconcile with Azrael and Lindsay and Daniella make a discovery.

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Another part down, two(?) to go. Gonna start clearing out that character list, make your bets on your favourite characters surviving or not!

The alternate ending to "Gamer Girlfriend" is up on Patreon this week! If you'd like to read it; https://www.patreon.com/posts/71470835?pr=true

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feauxen

Posted by feauxen 2 years ago Report

Well this doesn’t look good. And while it might not do much good from inside a cell, I notice that Melissa seems to still have the master key…

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killermil

Posted by killermil 2 years ago Report

please don't hurt Natasha

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Tethys

Posted by Tethys 2 years ago Report

If you're asking for bets, I'm going with the most common thing, even if there's nothing at stake. The villain(s) get exactly what they want and suffer no consequences whatsoever outside of alt endings, so that probably means... Azrael is completely fine despite the blackmail attempt, I'm like 85-15 guessing she converts Melissa. If Melissa gets converted, she probably eats Lindsay. Jessica probably goes in Azrael.

For a less confident guess, I suspect that Azrael is going to eat most of the people at the van but bring Sofia and Daniella together; Sofia will finally get Daniella before being eaten herself.

The alt ending to VF9 gives me some curiosity about where Natasha ends up, but my suspicion is that somehow Melissa finally eats her. That's a pretty big shot in the dark though. Maybe she hides on Azrael's way out but gets caught and brought back on her way back in or something. ????

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