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Chapter 17: Azrael's Fury By Vesari -- Report

Azrael unleashes her fury, Melissa and Jessica make a descision, and Lindsay and Daniella make their move.

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And now we enter... endgame.

Simpsons quotes aside, I'm hoping that the next part will be the last, but I may break it into two if I feel it needs to be. So we'll see.

The alternate ending of Subsuming the Substitute is up on Patreon! This time, Ms. Lynn figures out a different way to handle Brynn... https://www.patreon.com/posts/subsuming-alt-72739879

Thumbnail art by "e. tome", https://img3.gelbooru.com//images/79/92/7992d8190ba33cf8f5761428f99b4f2c.png

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

Never played FF14, so I'm curious why you'd think that? And I wouldn't say Jessica's my avatar, but I do like her.

Love your comments, as always!

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Augustin

Posted by Augustin 2 years ago Report

Marvellous as always. Difficult to believe we're almost at the end. It's been a great adventure.

I think you may have forgotten to upload the thumbnail.

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

Thanks, I had to reupload the story like 4 times before the chart displayed correctly, but I forgot to reupload the thumbnail, lol

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brennen

Posted by brennen 2 years ago Report

Azrael: "Where did I go wrong? Why does this whore not love me?"
Because she's a carpet-munching slut, you dumb black bimbo! Eat the bitch (And her friends) and find a real partner that ISN'T a social media thot.

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brennen

Posted by brennen 2 years ago Report

The funny thing is that her entire shpeel during chapter 11 does make sense in context of the world. However, where it falls apart is the same reason why Palpatine loses in the horrible sequel trilogy: She submitted to the horny. If she didn't do that, Azrael could have become the equivalent of the God Emperor from Warhammer 40K.

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Sira

Posted by Sira 2 years ago Report

How interesting for Daniella to knock herself up~

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1ring42

Posted by 1ring42 2 years ago Report

I love Danielle but i really wanna see her gurgled lol.

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SethArk2136

Posted by SethArk2136 2 years ago Report

I've never seen religion mentioned in a vore story before.

And now I never will.

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Ravenhide

Posted by Ravenhide 2 years ago Report

I'll be honest, I've spent the vast majority of my time just lurking on this site despite having had this account for four years. The fact that there are other folks who are into this sort of thing still feels strange despite coming to grips to fact that I do enjoy vore.

That said, found you on accident a while ago and I've been slowly binging your works. (As an aside, Knight and Princess is likely my favorite from you). I've been enjoying this series, and really hope Azrael gets what's coming to her. People who are that possessive just rub me the wrong way. She's a good villain don't get me wrong, but she needs to be knocked down several pegs or more. Looking forward to the next installment.

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