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Chapter 18: Victory or Death By Vesari -- Report

Dawn breaks, and the final battle commences. Not everyone will survive.

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Yes, it's been a hot minute since I posted a VoreFans part. But I finally had the time and inspiration to finish the story properly, so I hope any readers have been patient! This part and the one next week are the final parts of the story.

The final chapter of VoreFans is now up on Patreon. If you're interested in the end of the series, you can read it here! https://www.patreon.com/posts/vorefans-final-78230531

Also, there's an alternate ending poll up at the moment. The choices are:
- The Garden of Pleasure
- The Knight and the Princess: Part 3
- An Idol's Prestage Ritual
- Chastity's Reward
- The Futanari Club
If you want to vote on which story gets an alternate ending, you can join my Patreon and vote here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/february-ending-78230835

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Augustin

Posted by Augustin 2 years ago Report

Huh. That's not the twist I expected. Still, very good to see another instalment. There's a lot I want to write about it, but I'll wait until the end to deliver a full review.

In the meantime, I want to appreciate how everything related to Azrael is "dark". It's a fun quirk. The "dark digit" made me laugh out loud.

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

Thanks for sticking with it so far! I'll be interested to hear your thoughts.

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Untiming

Posted by Untiming 2 years ago Report

As much as I was hoping for some goofy Azrael lets her guard down and Natasha eats her david v goliath style. I do dig this a lot. I'm emotionally invested in the outcome.

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Untiming

Posted by Untiming 2 years ago Report

And horny all at the same time

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

Yeah, same.

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VincentRamone

Posted by VincentRamone 2 years ago Report

This was a good one. Certainly worth the wait and I look forward to the next one

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

Thanks for reading it!

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killermil

Posted by killermil 2 years ago Report

Do you see how easy the answer to all this problem was? but apparently no one thought of trying to stick a bullet in the middle of his eyes .....at least Natasha is still safe

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

Well, gun ownership in Sydney is much less common than you might expect. Most of her victims wouldn't have one on hand.

Plus, intimidation is a big factor too.

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brennen

Posted by brennen 2 years ago Report

Out of curiosity, why didn't Azrael just swallow her or snap her neck rather than waste time strangling Melissa if she resigned to killing her?

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Vesari

Posted by Vesari 2 years ago Report

She probably could have, but doing so would be a rather unceremonious way to kill someone as important to her as Melissa. Azrael's a prideful and deeply emotional person, and I can't see her just casually snapping Melissa's neck. She'd want it to be more dramatic, for her own personal fulfilment.

Also, strangling is a slow and painful way to die. At that moment, Azrael felt assured that she'd won, and it was important to her to stretch out Melissa's death for maximum retribution. To make sure that Melissa really understood that she had made a mistake by not submitting to her.

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Sira

Posted by Sira 2 years ago Report

Yeeeeeees!

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