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Chelsea continues to take care of her shrunken friend, Cole, with them both testing the limits of their new relationship.
This is an anonymously commissioned sequel to the story here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/765925
My commission queue remains open, but involves a lengthy wait. If any readers think they might be interested then please get in touch via PM/comments or on Discord (BunnyWrites#4146).
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Posted by ClosetedTiny 2 years ago Report
This was a great chapter! Thank you for sharing this with us and for keeping it non-fatal!
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it <3
Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report
The tension is so high. What a good read
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Thanks <3 I was worried the tension would drag a little, but hopefully there are enough climax peaks to make it worth it.
Posted by nosuspicious 2 years ago Report
A wonderful continuation! The writing is just as top notch and (by smut standards) mature as the first entry.
I loved the switch to Chelsea’s point-of-view. You write characters struggling between their conscience and horny urges very well.
My favorite parts were the yoga scene and the countdown near the end. The tension was so high.
I wonder what Jeffrey’s role in next chapter will be? Does Chelsea care about his safety as much as Cole’s? Hmmm
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Thank you, that's very kind <3
I always enjoy focusing on that should I/shouldn't I split as it's so relatable and makes the scenario feel more "real" IMO.
I thought you'd like the yoga scene, some of the poses I looked up for our same-size yoga scene was useful in this too.
And yeah there's a lot of possible options about where things could lead with Jeffrey. Cole is certainly safe, but Jeffrey...
Posted by applesallet 2 years ago Report
Maybe there could be two endings with one being a gentle loving end, while the other one is the more darker end.
Just a suggestion though.
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Perhaps yeah, it'll be up to the commissioner.
Posted by Nipper 2 years ago Report
Wow, I love how this is going!
The yoga and 'roleplaying' scenes were obviously great but I really liked the doll store and pet shop too, especially the implications.
I do hope Cole might end up wearing that harness, or maybe in a cage, even if it's only 'roleplaying'. They both seemed pretty into it. :D
Posted by BunnyWrites 2 years ago Report
Thanks <3 And yeah there's lots of fun ways this story could develop with the consensual antics Cole and Chelsea might get up to~
Posted by therealestdan21 1 year ago Report
Whatever happened to this lovely story
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
I'm hoping to write more of it someday, but I have a looooooooong commission queue so it takes me a long time before I can come back to a story.
Posted by aj1994314 1 year ago Report
can't wait!
Posted by EmmaTummy 1 year ago Report
Really hope you didn't abandon this story. Would love a part three <3
Posted by BunnyWrites 1 year ago Report
The sequel is still in my to-do queue, it's just a looooooong queue unfortunately.