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The CMC are out and about for their first Nightmare Night together in years. They are drawn to the new haunted house attraction that they learned their sisters and friends had been working on, with a special interest in the nighttime session. They'll do anything to make sure they get into the adults-only haunt at midnight, but as they'll soon learn, they would have had a much better time just bobbing for apples!
This one is an idea I've been thinking about over and over for years now, always wanting to start but never finding the time or motivation. Well I had an easy night at work the other night and found time to start it. I had so many ideas built up over the years that I ended up cranking out 50 pages in two days! This one is definitely a personal project for me, filled with my favorite themes and vore dynamics. I'm a sucker for buildup and atmosphere followed by harsh betrayal, so be warned that there is a good deal of non-vore worldbuilding leading up to the night fright.
If you want to go straight from the intro to the good stuff, you can just skip to where it says Night Fright.
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Posted by Gogglepop 2 years ago Report
“And possibly a lifetime of therapy bills for the only participant who didn’t need to get brought back.“
Yeah fairly sure everyone involved is gonna need some therapy my guy. Y’all inflicted actual psychological and physical torture on like 50 people. That’s not an “oopsie” moment there, that’s a “holy fuck you violated the Geneva conventions” moment. Curious to see how the ponyville economy handles the sheer multitude of lawsuits this would result in. Don’t think the organizers thought that one through lol
Then again, porn logic. Would be interested to see the fallout of this regardless. Regardless, you do write horror pretty well. Don’t see a lot of stories like that on here that really sell that angle as well as your stories.
Posted by carrierheart 2 years ago Report
Horror and being hunted by those you would normally run to for help are some of my biggest draws. Something so delightfully twisted about the betrayal and fear aspect.
Posted by Mightyshockwave 2 years ago Report
Amazing story! You balanced playfulness and horror very well. I loved the buildup at the beginning. It perfectly set the tone and helped me to get immersed in the story.
Posted by carrierheart 2 years ago Report
I’m glad you enjoyed it! I’m happy to finally make it after thinking about it for so long. Horror is absolutely my favorite setting and Halloween is my favorite time of year for vore.
Posted by matthewthawes 2 years ago Report
wtf to long could read but if i was buraus this world would be hakied before i finished watching the events
Posted by matthewthawes 2 years ago Report
Form tracking identity, special tracking identity, Schrodinger's cat, the ship of Theseus, life, and death, you violated them all in the course of a single afternoon. When you change something against its free will or change something into something, it's not, you essentially kill it. On top of that, when something dies, it's meant to be a sort of fulfillment. If you bring something back from death, you make that death meaningless, making its life the same….
Sweetie after having things explained to her
What the inglorious fuck twilight. You're a living violation of nature, all of you. Sentient creatures are not food.
There are two types of people defined by opposite beliefs on one end we have people who would be thrilled to see loved ones brought back to life on the other we have people who believe the dead should remain dead out of respect which do you think I am? So hateful to site in memory.
What you’ve done is violate my very core. This won't stand. Here's what you're going to do. You're not going to whip anything. You're going to isolate and extract my memories and emotions. it's unfair I be the only one to experience this. As part of your punishment, you are to be on the receiving end of what you’ve done here, after which. I will ultimately decide what is done from then on. For the time being, none of you are my friends and family. You will each have to re-earn that title.