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So arrives the end of our adventures with Newton. A return to his old way of life is just, one last score away.
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Posted by Kasra 2 years ago Report
A very nice conclusion to Newton's story! It's been a heck of a journey getting here.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 2 years ago Report
He's had quite the adventure
Posted by Kasra 2 years ago Report
I wasn't sure whether or not he was going to make it at multiple points, this final chapter included!
Posted by DrakeZephyr 2 years ago Report
I did consider early on that his tale should end with a cat swallowing him. Something jarring, just, swallowed, and a paragraph or two following the cat before the curtain closed. But... it's not generally my style, So I didn't really pursue that route
Posted by magicboy13 2 years ago Report
I've always expected that this series would end openly, with Newton continuing to wander. His plot armor is so strong that I figured you were just using him to explore various settings.
The ending is just ambiguous enough that you can't quite tell whether he's still in the city or closer to where he started in the beginning of the series, and I like that. Good job on seeing this all the way through.
Also, this entry had been very nice to read! Wonderful work.
Posted by DrakeZephyr 2 years ago Report
Sadly my character's survival can sometimes be a touch predictable. I did give serious consideration to introducing a, replacement of sorts and having him find a stomach... but, I got to like him. And I'm fond of ending at the beginning