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Hordes of huge, reptilian space-creatures appear all across the globe, driven by animalistic hunger and a powerful appreciation for lovely, nutritious earth-girls! The sexy ladies of earth might not enjoy all the attention though...
This is a pretty straightforward tale of lots and lots of vore on a large scale. Not my most complex story, but it was a fun time. It's also been a long while since I did a story featuring primal, animal-intelligence predators, which I definitely liked revisiting.
Hope you enjoy!
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Posted by lint231 2 years ago Report
Absolutely can't go wrong with the classics.
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Definitely! I think I might be focusing my effort on more like this in the immediate future, too.
Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report
Yet another great story of yours, I have a fondness for the various angles and locations this is seen from, from TV-reporters to schools and so. These alien creatures were highly voracious to put it mildly, and supervised by an artificial intelligence whom probably take more pleasure in her job than what her originally programmer intended, also makes this fun reading ^^
Though I wonder what the program wanted the interview for, it would be hilarious if the person (or company) who made this came back and found out what the AI did after reading her reports XD
(I can imagine the insurance company groaning when learning about it.)
What I found intriguing and surprisingly engaging was that you left Andrea seemingly alive (though in a veeeery unsettling place). I would love to know what she eventually had to say when the rest of the earth's population came back, especially when discovering all the media footage and recordings left behind.
As always, your story was a thrill and a joy to read, there was a lot of good moments there that I surely will enjoy reading both twice and trice in the future : )
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I really enjoyed just indulging in a bunch of vore scenes across the globe. I think it's safe to say that AI should be made very carefully, or else who knows what they'll get up to while you're not looking.
Yeah, I do like to occasionally have the 'prey' characters escape, since I enjoy a bit of uncertainty and unpredictability. I'm sure Andrea (and the handful of other survivors) will get lots of attention once everyone snaps back. And there will be plenty of footage to back up their claims as well.
I'm glad you feel this one has some stuff worth re-reading! That's a high compliment indeed!
Posted by MightyMaw 2 years ago Report
I always enjoy mass vore scenarios like these a whole lot, great work with the large-scale consumption! :D
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Thanks! Me too: large-scale vore is definitely a favorite of mine! :3
Posted by Forstand 2 years ago Report
Awesome, I love it!
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Thanks you! :D
Posted by Guzzlord1an 2 years ago Report
God damn, this story was incredibly well done! I love the apocalyptic nature of it all, and how all this wasn't even necessary. The idea of almost every young, attractive woman on Earth being sentenced to a gruesome, extended digestion is incredibly dark even for me, but this story does a masterful job with it! And I do ponder the state of the inevitable, sadly highly misogynistic but incredibly horny human society that follows this event.
Just wondering, but how do you think are Caretaker's rules for deciding who to safely displace and who to offer to the Vulizards (age, appearance, build, etc.)? I doubt that she considers elderly women good prey, for example.
Posted by Guzzlord1an 2 years ago Report
And sorry for all the questions but I love this story; what age and ethnicities do you give for the girls in this story? (Tamara, Miou, Alisha, Andrea, etc.)
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
I don't mind! I'm happy you're so into it. xD
Let's see, everyone is at least 18 in age, but as I recall:
Tamara was supposed to be Brazilian and maybe mid-twenties.
Miou was Japanese and probably 18 or 19.
Alisha was probably early thirties and . . . redheaded? (that's an ethnicity, right? xD).
Andrea was early twenties or so and generic 'Caucasian'.
Posted by Guzzlord1an 2 years ago Report
Interesting, thanks! Alisha and Aminy both appear to be Middle Eastern names so I assume she’s Middle Eastern in ancestry, which is interesting given her red hair, which I assume she dyed. Last but what would you say for Heidy and Veronica?
If you have any other details you’d like to share too, feel free :)
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Yeah, that makes sense, considering natural redheads are actually super-rare, as I recall.
Let's see . . . I guess Heidy was probably late twenties and maybe something like German in ancestry?
Veronica was maybe twenty or so too, and most likely at least partly Latin. Didn't give her too much thought, given her screen-time, to be honest. xD
Posted by Guzzlord1an 2 years ago Report
Neat thanks! I like Veronica being Latina hehe
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you liked that large-scale, apocalyptic setting - It's one I'm very fond of too!
Caretaker has very high standards, and only selects the most beautiful young women as food for her Vulizards. Children or elderly do not qualify for feeding, naturally.
Posted by Guzzlord1an 2 years ago Report
Ooh, neat! Hopefully that means this was slightly less of an extinction level event for human society lol. I wonder if being physically handicapped but still young and attractive makes you any less of a target for them, though that’s quite a dark thing to ponder.
I’d love to see more stories in this style! There are a lot of universes out there, and many probably have quite a few earths that are the target of hungry woman-eaters
Posted by Guzzlord1an 2 years ago Report
Something I also like is how ultimately pointless all the horror in this story is, because it’s not like the vulizards even need to eat human women; the caretaker’s just malfunctioning and wants to give them the tastiest option. And thus the galaxy’s fairest race loses the hundreds of millions, probably almost a billion, that comprise its fairest demographic. And they get the most horrible and extended deaths too! So mean, so horrible, yet so hot!
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Yeah, I'm reminded of someone talking about how AI can misbehave. Unless you set them up carefully, they will sacrifice absurdly huge amounts of a parameter they don't care about (how human women feel about being digested alive) in exchange for absurdly tiny gains in a parameter they DO care about (improved Vulizard happiness).
But yeah, there's something oddly appealing about the absurd, needless injustice of it, that I gravitate towards with vore in general: One side gets a single, filling meal, while the other gets digested.
Posted by Guzzlord1an 2 years ago Report
Indeed, that bit about absurd injustice is one of my favorite parts of the story! We certainly have the same taste heheh
Posted by PrinnyDood 2 years ago Report
Yeah, not an extinction-event, but Thanos would probably approve of the population reduction. xD
I probably will do more like this at some point.
I never mentioned it explicitly, but if the Vulizards really like the ladies on a specific planet, Caretaker will sometimes wait 18 years or so, and then come back to give the next generation of sexy ladies their turn digesting. x3 But maybe that's too dark, and I'd be doing a lot of rehashing, so I'm unlikely to write that kind of direct sequel, unless I have a bunch of really appealing new ideas...
Posted by Guzzlord1an 2 years ago Report
Neat! The idea of waiting for the next generation for girls to grow up and then devour them is certainly very dark and would probably be a true extinction level event, though given that you just wrote a story that involves basically every young healthy woman on earth being subjected to several days of brutal, fatal digestion it’s not like we have any limits. And I do have a perverse fascination with the idea because of how delightfully evil it is, plus further exploration of the post-Vulizard society in this universe and how the people felt about their sisters/friends/partners (maybe even mothers but i do hope this ai doesnt target them because that would be way too dark) disappearing.
If you want to revisit this idea but want to make it “less” dark, you could just start from a clean slate in an alternate Earth. No matter what, I’d love to see whatever you do next with this universe/idea!