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Tags: Anthro Anthro Pred Anthro Predator Anthro Prey Anthro/Anthro Beanie Pred belly noise Big Belly blue fur Bonbon Bonnibel Bunny pred Bunny predator Bunny prey Burp Burping burping pred Casual Casual digestion Casual pred Casual predator Casual vore F/F Fatal fatalvore Female Pred female predators Female Prey Furry Furry Pred furry predator furry predators furry prey Furry Vore Furry/Furry Inexperienced Pred Multiple pred multiple predators Multiple Preds Multiple Preys multiple vore New predator Oral Soft Oral Soft Vore Oral Vore oral vore implied oral-vore Rabbit pred Rabbit Predator Rabbit Prey Roommates Same Size Size difference Size difference vore Smaller Pred/Larger Prey smaller prey/larger pred Soft Digestion Soft Vore Story Teaching how to vore teaching pred teaching vore Unwilling Prey Willing Pred Willing Pred/Unwilling Prey Willing Predator Wolf Prey
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After watching how effortlessly her friend and veteran predator Beanie can devour anyone she chooses, the blue furred bunny Bonnibel asks for some pointers to become a predator herself. And Beanie is more than happy to help a friend learn just how easy it is to gobble up whoever she sets her eyes on! Lots of burps, and lots of happy buns with even happier, gurgling tums~
Another commission for Nexsus4854 featuring more of those lovely bunnies from Roommates, an online series by TG Weaver which can be found here: https://desuarchive.org/_/search/boards/trash.desu.meta/text/roommates/type/op/page/1/
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Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Heh, what a fun story! Simple, spunky, dark, cute, and cruel! I will say, I wish the pacing could've been a liiitle slower, a liiitle more detailed, this wasnt eben 4000 words so it easily could've been more, so when you say just "she explaied her breathing tactic" instead of writing it out is kinda looking like a cut corner.
Either way, a lot of fun, a fun dynamic, and a fun story! Well done!
Posted by Walker 1 year ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Okay i just realized this was a commission. One writer to another, I'm sorry for telling you what I said baha it wasn't your idea
Posted by Walker 1 year ago Report
Indeed, nor had I been looking for critique on this piece either. But I’m glad you enjoyed the story!
Posted by alittletrolling 1 year ago Report
Yeah, my apologies again, i would've been annoyed at a critique on a commission too hahaha