Posted by TMVore 2 years ago Report

So many stories great in such a short time, you're an early Christmas present!

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Your comments are a great gift for me too! Keep them up!

Posted by Halodarkpd 2 years ago Report

Fucking love this! Not to many stories about female prey in first person ❤️

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I like to place a lot of my stories in first person to aid in immersion. Let me know if you enjoy anything else!

Posted by Halodarkpd 2 years ago Report

I'm a shoe lover, I loved the part of her removing her tennis shoes! I only wished she kept them as trophies ❤️

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Trophies eh? I'll keep that in mind. Sounds interesting.

Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report

Spoilers


Nice twist. The attack from behind was great

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Thanks, I always want to keep the reader on their toes and looking for details or clues in the story

Posted by gva274 2 years ago Report

This was excellent, very well done! I enjoy the prey pov perspective and you executed it well.

//spoilers//

I really enjoy things that are surprising like that

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Thanks! Yea, Amelia was NOT a good choice of prey.

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

Ooof I’m not sure who I should route for lol Amandawas killed but like … she was going to get Amelia killed

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Hmmm… maybe I should write an alternative story.

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

Nah , cause then you’ll have written a non canon story that doesn’t really change anything XD unless it was like the reveal of reforming but even that would be iffy.
I think giving us a story involving Natasha as a pred was good enough

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Awesome. I appreciate the feedback!

Posted by infinitegest 2 years ago Report

LOVE the switcharoo of who is pred and who is prey, it gives it a feeling that preds aren't just monsters but are justified for surviving in a world of eat or be eaten. I also love the details of how the pred has been anticipating this moment for months, loosening pants to make room for the belly, and I definitely go crazy for a pred getting turned on by their own belly and their meal's struggles, masturbating through digestion. Absolutely a favourite.

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I appreciate it! I love keeping readers on their toes with my stories!