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Tags: 2nd person pov Belly Betrayal Big Belly Big Breasts Big Butt Breasts Burping Burping clothes Butt chubby predator Digestion Digestion Noises F/F Fast Digestion Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Hannah Lockheart hesitant pred Human Oral Vore Painful Digestion petite prey Same Size sexual vore unwilling to willing pred Weight Gain Willing to unwilling prey
Once again, your girlfriend was pressuring you to work on developing your predatory abilities. However, this time, she might be getting more than she bargained for.
Thumbnail was made with Novel AI (I am not an artist nor pretend to be)
After receiving feedback on my last story, I switch up my writing process. This time I focused on adding visual details and descriptive dialogue between the characters.
Let me know what you think below. Each comment helps me refine my skills. ^_^
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Posted by TMVore 2 years ago Report
You're a word artist though.
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Thanks, I appreciate it ^_^
Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report
Silly Samantha! Didn't read enough on Eka's portal
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
A rookie mistake~
Posted by Summerleaves 2 years ago Report
I normally prefer second person from the prey perspective, but this was pretty neat.
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I identify with preds heavily which leads me to unintentionally write from their perspective.
Posted by Summerleaves 2 years ago Report
I don't mind, I also write from their perspective, but usually in third-person.
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
I've done some third person work here, but I always struggle to make things seem personal. I'll have to work on that.
Posted by Summerleaves 2 years ago Report
Well, you probably know the best ways to get better are to read and to practice