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Hello, this is my first story created as the first chapter of my series "Devouring the Azur Lane" where some preds take care of the azur lane devouring all the girls (only ferals no anthors).
I hope I can work on it along with many other works, but I hope even more that you enjoy the story even though my digestion method is sort of...strange.
Thank you very much for reading I hope to see you in the future with my next series :3 (if you want to talk im open)
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Posted by Wisky 2 years ago Report
I took a look at the tags and thought I wouldn't like it, but after getting into it some more I read all the way through and found that I liked this one quite a bit. While painful digestion isn't usually my thing, the way you wrote it worked pretty well. The biggest thing I really didn't like was just the deaths at the end and the general despair, which for me personally killed the mood. Besides that, I thought this was a great start for an upcoming writer! I will watch your career with great interest.
Posted by Teimporta 2 years ago Report
Hello thanks for the critic and yeah I thought a lot of the things you said when writing it but I decided to do it that way since I wanted to save more cruel things for the next stories, hehe but thanks for commenting ^^
Posted by Wisky 2 years ago Report
I look forward to reading those! Hopefully we get to see some more Royal Navy girls get churned, since most of them generally make good prey.
Posted by Teimporta 2 years ago Report
Of course they are top tier meal
Posted by Battle541 2 years ago Report
Interesting story. Sadly I'm not into snake preds. But I'll try to follow the story and see how it goes.
Posted by Battle541 2 years ago Report
I am curious through. How long it you to make this and when did you thought of this story?
Posted by Teimporta 2 years ago Report
Well when i was motivated i writed 4/5 in 5 days and the last part (the death part) was made after 1 minth since i lost motivation, but when ended it and making the math ummm it took me like 15 hours to write that and do the corrections (i speak spanish after all)
Posted by Battle541 2 years ago Report
I see.
Posted by Courier3227 2 years ago Report
Love it. Fatal and torture internals
Posted by Teimporta 2 years ago Report
hehe thanks you
Posted by WingedDevourer 1 year ago Report
I like how much control the snake had over digesting, pulling back the stomach walls and the different types of acid. He was quite cruel and enjoying himself.
Posted by Rhysion 1 year ago Report
I'm not familiar with the Azur Lane thing, but this was certainly a very devious snake! Causing problems is more important than simply having a full belly!