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Troubling supervisors, long shifts, and hot grease plagues Melissa as she attempts to service her hectic shifts at Burger Town. However, her arduous situation becomes even more difficult when a last minute customer enters the restaurant after closing.
This is a direct sequel to The Non-dairy Creamer story. If you want to brush up on it, you can read it here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/854539
This story features Melissa from the Lovely Couple Series. You can read from the beginning here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/848858
The images were generated using Novel AI (I am not an artist nor pretend to be.)
Once again, Tell me what you think about my work. Let me know things you like or don't like ^__^
Make sure to give a shout out to anthill33 for some extra help with the images:https://aryion.com/g4/user/anthill33
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report
Initially I felt sorry, but then I remembered what these two were up to
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Life comes at you fast.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report
Guess its time to change the title of the series lmao
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Hmmm… I wonder about that. Stay tuned
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report
I guess Alice does have options now, given the state of her current gf
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
I’m not going to spoil it, but there’s A LOT of options
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
Well I guess the lovely couple series is over lmao .
Tbh I thought she was gonna eat Sandra but that sucks for her and Alice . There’s no couple anymore
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Seems that way doesn’t it.
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
That was a devious way to respond almost makes me wonder if Melissa survived somehow but you’re a fan of fatality not reforming so this is suspicious
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
As you know, I’m very devious~
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
True but by adding some sort of reforming or respawn mechanic in would retroactively change multiple settings you’ve written . So i don’t think you’re that devious .
Plus this is karma for Melissa and Alice
Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report
Thats probably the only stuff from DreamEater I havent read, this character was a pred apparently? How did the assistant manager leave the restaurant not as prey? Why did she put up with the karen at all while so hungry? So many questions
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Melissa is relatively passive if Alice isn’t around~
Posted by SirEdwardthe3rd 2 years ago Report
First off, I'm loving these new AI pics that you've been putting into your stories! They do an amazing job of illustrating the different voracious scenes scattered throughout it while also showing the reader what our characters look like! Secondly, it's sad to see a pred like Melissa go... At least she went out in the belly of another great character (who I hope we see more of in the future)! All in all, amazing job on this one! Definitely one of my favorites!
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Thank, I appreciate it! This is definitely the end of stage one for this storyline! I’m looking forward on writing on Sandra in the future as well.
Posted by maximusking2 2 years ago Report
I liked this story a lot, also I like the additive of pictures with the written story. Keep up the good work!
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Thanks. I figured having a visual helps paint a better picture.
Posted by maximusking2 2 years ago Report
Also not sure why but I want to see more of this cruel Karen pred honestly
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Haha, it seems Sandra is getting pretty popular
Posted by maximusking2 2 years ago Report
I can understand stand why
Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report
Woah! There's pictures now!
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Oh yea, I’m awesome~
Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report
Yea
Posted by yoyoma 2 years ago Report
The AI images really enhance the story
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I appreciate it! ^__^
Posted by Bright 2 years ago Report
If vore was a real thing, I' bet Karens would be entitled enough to eat people.
(She took the evidence with her, but there might be camera footage :p)
Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report
They’d be public enemy number one
Posted by hdial002 1 year ago Report
Why did you kill off melissa she was a pretty good character
Posted by DreamEater 1 year ago Report
Probably because she tasted good~