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Reeling after your last unintentionally sexual encounter with your coworker, Alice, you find yourself pursing online dating to recapture that same feeling. However, what happens when your date becomes a little too interested in your predatory capabilities?

All characters are age (21+)

All images were made with NovelAI (I am not an artist nor pretend to be)

You can read more about Alice's ditzy coworker, Jasmine, here in "The Office Creamer": https://aryion.com/g4/view/852140

To figure out what Alice is up to during the events of this story, you can read "The Bully" here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/868409

Let me know what you think about this story below? What do you think of Jasmine so far?

Comments

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

Oof poor alice , it looks like not only did she get Melissa killed ,and the pink haired girl killed , but now she’s going to be a cumstain . I wonder if this is justice for all the people she fed to Melissa lmao

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Seems like it doesn’t it~

Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report

On another glance (Can't help but make a comment on this.) Is how it's honestly a reminder that predators, are just as likely to become prey, as the prey they consume on a casual regular basis.

Highlander style.

Which honestly, makes one wonder which one of your characters, you'd perma-churn off next, cum or stomach food wise?

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Well, I like destroying the concept of plot armor. It makes the scenes more realistic.

Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report

Can you please mark your comments as a spoiler

Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report

Roselia's the name of a pokemon lol

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Yea, that’s why I chose it ^_^

Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report

Oh, is Roselia your fav pokemon?

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Nah, just like the name~

Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report

Another amazing and hot story! (Sorry for commenting twice)

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Anytime. Feel free to comment anytime my guy.

Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report

Ok, thx

Posted by RachelBabe 2 years ago Report

One thing that I find myself thinking about in "casual" vore settings is just how fatalistic it is. People killing each other for a sexual high. It's not a funkiller but it does make me think; why do average people have it within themselves to commit murder for petty reasons? etc etc.

A few settings like this just make reformers commonplace, but that then makes there be zero consequences. I think my favorite version is to make reformation expensive but not life-ruiningly expensive. You gotta pick who you bring back.

sorry for the ramble, but I'm curious what your thoughts are.

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

I never really liked the idea of reforming. I feel like it reduces the suspense of scenes drastically. I might play around with the idea in the future though.

Posted by RachelBabe 2 years ago Report

Mn. I was curious though, your thoughts on world where it doesn't exist, like your works. Where in casual settings plenty of women have no scruples against killing on another. It's not a moral judgement of course, it's all fantasy, it's just something that gets my analytical side going.

Posted by Bright 2 years ago Report

Good descriptions

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by Bod67 2 years ago Report

It was so hot reading Melissa getting eaten, so I hope Jasmine nabs herself ALice as prey! So hot

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

I’m glad you liked it! Yea, I like writing dialogue the most~