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Eating the Competition By DreamEater -- Report

Misty finds herself being shunned by her former teammates after getting kicked off of the Dream State University Volleyball team. With her emotions running high, it would be a shame if her evening made a turn for the worse.

All images were made using NovelAI (I am not an artist nor pretend to be.)

This story features Amelia from the "Student Athlete" story: https://aryion.com/g4/view/852463

Let me know what you think about the story below!

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asdn534Sans

Posted by asdn534Sans 2 years ago Report

I loved the story, great work! The images really help set scenarios, I hope you utilize them in more works!

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Thanks! I’m glad you like them!

AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report

Amelia is super hot. Some more dialogue from her in this would have been nice but the pov character was totally great

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Thanks! Yea, I tried to give an outside pov of the team and how they’re perceived

doomed

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

i think its safe to say im pretty much ok with any of these girls getting eaten. because i totally went into this hoping for a different outcome. especially since the motive for killing her was dumb . during the fight i was rooting and hoping for her death lmao but instead another person is killed for what is definitely a toxic team

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Good, good. Let the hate flow through you~

doomed

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

oh no its not hate ,if i hated them id tell you because mits a good thing if a writer can intentionally make a reader hate a character. its more so that i dont really care whether they live or die . given the setting ive got no real attachment to any of the girls . although i find it a miracle they are alive since none of them are really good preds so it totally feels like plot armor. but i dont hate them, i just dont care if they survive the story.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

That’s fair~

doomed

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

thats the drawback of a oneshot based fatal vore series. with everyone being killed every story, its hard to get attached since you never know who will be here the next story

Stulti

Posted by Stulti 2 years ago Report

I definitely enjoy the use of NovelAI in your writing. The use of the imagery goes along nicely with your more recent stories!

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Thanks buddy! I appreciate you showing some love. It’s always nice seeing some positivity for a change ^_^

LostOne

Posted by LostOne 2 years ago Report

Will you apply them to the last works you did retroactively or will they stay imageless? Images really helped make the story easier to read by showing progress and adding more resting space for the eyes. Like a commercial break if they were actually cool.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

They will probably remain imageless. Just so I can see the progression of my work over times

LostOne

Posted by LostOne 2 years ago Report

Solid Reason, shame i wont get to see the goblin eating the merchant and body guards in picture form. Yet regardless cant wait to see your next works.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Stay tuned. I may surprise you

Bright

Posted by Bright 2 years ago Report

Volleyball politics, surprisingly cutthroat.

DreamEater

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Cutthroat and fullthroat