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This is the first time I've ever posted anything like this. Constructive criticism regarding tone, language, pacing, etc. is greatly appreciated.
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Posted by TheHumanPred 2 years ago Report
Well that was dam hot lol
Posted by TheGreatest1986 2 years ago Report
Thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Posted by TheHumanPred 2 years ago Report
That being said, I do love the whole Feral Pred x Male Prey aspect of the story. Also love that the Mom want a Daughter now. Kind of cute.
Posted by TheGreatest1986 2 years ago Report
Hopefully her next child will be more cautious. Who knows, maybe we'll find out? ;)
Posted by TheHumanPred 2 years ago Report
Lol. I think she should be smarter than her past brother. Maybe she can make fun of other boys when they get gulp down,
Posted by Jedzoku 2 years ago Report
I've spotted a typo near the end. You mixed Sally and Nina's names up when she uploaded the video.
Posted by AdrianIlliovici 1 year ago Report
Nice and hot. Love the ending! Love how the zoo keeper doesn't just not give a shit if the kid dies, but literally wants him to die. All for some nice internet clout lol. We need more of these kinds of observers in vore pieces with kid prey.