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(Reupload because I wanted to make a few minor edits)
*Note: this story is a sequel to my previous story, “Trouble at the Zoo” if you haven’t yet, I would recommend reading that story first*
Thanks to TheHumanPred for giving me the idea for this story's basis. I was originally going to have the daughter eaten by the horse. They suggested that the daughter instead tease boys who get eaten. As a result, I think this story is much more interesting.
Anyways, I'm still pretty new at this whole writing thing. So I would greatly appreciate any writing tips.
I'm also willing to hear ideas for future stories. Would you like me to follow Sally's adventure, or focus on something else? I would love to hear your feedback.
Anyways, thanks for reading!
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Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 2 years ago Report
Nice! Loved the taunting. That was very hot~
Posted by TheGreatest1986 2 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by sharky 2 years ago Report
horse make really good preds
Posted by TheGreatest1986 2 years ago Report
They're totally underrated
Posted by TheHumanPred 2 years ago Report
Dam that was hot! Also love how Cassandra and Sally have a loving and healthy mother-daughter relationship.
Posted by TheGreatest1986 2 years ago Report
Thanks, I'm definitely planning on expanding their relationship in future stories.
Posted by TanookiBoy12 2 years ago Report
Honestly very very interesting story and I loved the vore areas! Honestly, she should just lure the jocks in and leave the smart people alive
Posted by TheGreatest1986 2 years ago Report
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I think it's an interesting idea to choose who gets eaten. Unfortunately, I don't think Sally's going to bother making that distinction. I think everyone is eligible to get gurgled in her book, but who knows? She might change her mind in the future.
Posted by SleepyIsland48 2 years ago Report
Lovely story. I’d love to see you do female prey sometime.
Posted by zargein 7 months ago Report
I like this