I mean, it's clear from the context what happened, and it's in a separate section to mark the transition, so I'd say it's fine (you could use a horizontal line or symbol or something else visible instead of an extra newline, but that's super nitpicky)
From the way it looks at first glance, it just looks like just another paragraph, and thus some might think it refers to some other group of characters that aren't connected to the first pair.
(I get what happened, but there might be some that don't.)
I'm not entirely sure this is what they mean when they say that cats have nine lives, though that's certainly a generous number of second chances for someone down on their luck.
Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
To be fair, that last section could use a "X amount of years later" label.
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Posted by Mourtzouphlos 2 years ago Report
I mean, it's clear from the context what happened, and it's in a separate section to mark the transition, so I'd say it's fine (you could use a horizontal line or symbol or something else visible instead of an extra newline, but that's super nitpicky)
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Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
From the way it looks at first glance, it just looks like just another paragraph, and thus some might think it refers to some other group of characters that aren't connected to the first pair.
(I get what happened, but there might be some that don't.)
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Posted by Entirely_Logical 2 years ago Report
I'm not entirely sure this is what they mean when they say that cats have nine lives, though that's certainly a generous number of second chances for someone down on their luck.
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