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Carnivores By ObsidianSnake -- Report

Dvenjay has spent his entire birthday with each of his overlapping friend groups. The snow leopard's carnivore friends have arranged a special treat for him: a planned event starring a very special dominatrix. The little lady teaches the large carnivores new things about themselves.

6.8k words. More visceral than usual in parts.

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alockwood1

Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report

Interesting.

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Mourtzouphlos

Posted by Mourtzouphlos 2 years ago Report

Wasn't sure how much I'd like it based on the description.

I liked it a lot

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Mourtzouphlos

Posted by Mourtzouphlos 2 years ago Report

This is kind of your thing, isn't it? It's a lot like Eanli, except the subtext is text and it's not really dystopian.

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ObsidianSnake

Posted by ObsidianSnake 2 years ago Report

Glad you liked it!
There's a few similarities! I'm exploring a couple new topics in this one, but in the same language.

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