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Kurask the Void Dragon finally heads to the Hero's Labyrinth to do some 'training'!
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This is an interactive story, so please comment your vote for the questions below, or PM your vote to me if you'd prefer, to change the path of the story! You can vote on all, questions or just the ones that interest you, but only one vote per person per question please!
The first chapter is linked just below, and it gives a full explanation of what's happening here! https://aryion.com/g4/view/844537
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Alright, I am sorry for the delay. Biiiig dip in personal motivation. I also wanted to work more sexy-time into this chapter, but every time I tried it felt unnatural and forced, so here we are, another set up chapter for you guys to read before the ‘good stuff’ I suppose. Hopefully I can make up for it with some balls to the wall dungeon crawling goodness for the next few chapters!
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Votes This Chapter
>Down in the Dungeon with a Wet Heroine< Rune is in a pretty sad and pathetic state, exhausted from hauling a heavy torch, soaked from a trap of Holy water, and just generally miserable from her accumulated failures so far. Kurask could take advantage of her and tease her further, after all, she needs to dry off before they continue, right? Or he could be a little more supportive, maybe use this as a ‘team building’ moment?
A. Order her to strip and dry off while he watches and makes teasing comments!
Some light teasing to pass the time never hurt anyone, right?
B. ‘Assist’ her in drying off.
Is it wrong to taste a Heroine in a Dungeon? Probably not for a Dragon.
C. Have Terssi help Rune dry off.
Why not have Terssi help the Heroine out? Maybe some of the tension between them can be defused that way?
>>Great Hero’s Labyrinth: First Ward, The Water Level<< There are several distinct sections of the Dungeon, each loosely separated by the power of their occupants. This is supposed to be a training zone for the Heroine, after all. However, as you all will find out, not everything is perfectly right within the ever so well taken care of Dungeon. As such, I would like to try giving the audience some limited powers over shifting the Dungeon as you would like! Each Ward will have a trio of votes to start it off, Difficulty(for the Rune and Terssi), Corruptive Influence(I will give several Choices), and General Occupancy. Let me know if this is silly or if you enjoyed having this vote, as I can bypass it for subsequent chapters if you’d prefer.
>First Ward: Difficulty< How ‘dangerous’ should this ward be for Rune and Terssi?
A. Walk in the Park
Little real danger, mostly easily dispatched monsters that are only inconvenient or humorously dealt with at worst. Probably meant to train some specific skill of the Hero that Kurask’s presence makes pointless.
B. Training Arc!
A good mix of strong and weak opponents that Challenge the two women enough, but nothing in the realm of life threatening. Kurask being there is really only a final protective layer that ensures both women are safe, but he probably wouldn’t really be needed to prevent the worst anyway.
C. Danger Zone
Someone fucked up the settings, because this Dungeon doesn’t fuck around. Every monster, trap, and aspect of this Ward is dripping with lethal intent. If Kurask wasn’t here, the pair of women would have no chance of making it out of here alive! Even Kurask isn’t totally safe in such a place!
>First Ward: Corruptive Influence< What does this Ward do to it’s occupants, and by extension, to Rune and Terssi if(when) they get caught? Any changes will be given the option to remain permanent or not at the end of the ward/chapter they appear.
A. Horny
It’s a staple! Getting caught by monsters or traps will leave the Heroines a panting, mewling mess, unable to think or act properly until they get some ‘attention’.
B. Bimbo
Monster and trap effects will lower their intelligence and reasoning abilities, making them more and more likely to get into bad situations again. It might also make them more pliable to Kurask’s influence, but surely he wouldn’t take advantage of such a thing...right?
C. Physical(Aquatic)
This Ward has aquatic and amphibious monsters and theme-ing, so modifications to the Heroines would be along those lines.
D. None
The Ward doesn’t generally have any effect on the Heroines other than being dangerous.
>First Ward: General Occupancy< How full is this ward? At least, before Kurask arrives.
A. Full to bursting with Monsters!
Someone overfilled this section...the monsters will come in droves and near constantly, making for a pretty persistent threat! There will be much less care and character in each individual monster though!
B. As Intended
The Monsters here are spread out and thoughtful, giving a bit more time for each encounter.
C. Sparse
Each Monster in this ward is important, making their encounters more detailed, but also shifting some importance to traps and other challenges as well.
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Voting for this chapter is now closed. Thank you for your interest, and check out the latest chapter to cast your vote there!
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Posted by Graywolf18 2 years ago Report
First vote: C, have the ladies be friendly. They're stuck with us so the teasing can wait a chapter.
Second vote: B, Training Arc. Challenging but non-threatening sounds like "smorgasbord" to a hungi Dragon.
Third vote: Well... all the logical parts of my smooth brain are telling me to vote for D... but I ain't gunna. A, Make 'em pant with want.
Forth vote: I want C so we can make them spicy but this is still a training montage at normal speed. I'll vote B to make things fun. Enough time to deal with the third vote and still get some rest and heavy petting.
Posted by Randomdude5 2 years ago Report
>Down in the Dungeon with a Wet Heroine<
Vorny brain says A, but logic brain says C.
First Ward: Difficulty
Vorny brain says C, but logic brain says B.
>First Ward: Corruptive Influence<
Vorny brain says A, but logic brain says D
>First Ward: General Occupancy<
Vorny brain says C, so a strong monster can swallow one of them, but logic brain says B so Kurask can farm meals and xp.
I can't decide whether I want a vorny or logical combo. I don't really want a mix and match. I sorta want one or the other.
I guess I will go with the vorny combo. I think it would be hot if Kurask had to rescue a hot and bothered heroine, or princess from the stomach of a monster.
Posted by nyanyan 2 years ago Report
1C - Still not entirely clear on why Rune is so upset, but I'm pretty sure this would help figure it out. It always works, right? Personally i think Rune was hoping for some alone time with Kurask abd that's why she was upset we brought the princess.
2B - It's not training if it's too easy, and while >I< Personally enjoy high difficulty, i don't think it'd be a great idea to risk our ladies just for that reason.
3 - A) This is the only one I'm not sure of. Horny would be fun, might also help us, and the two of them, 'get closer'. B) I'm not, personally a fan of this kink, so just, no thanks. As a temp thing it might be fun, but I'd be too worried about the 'make it permanent at the end' part. C) Could be fun, get a couple monster/fish girls? Neat. Nee flavor for Kurask as well. D) Normies!
If i were forced to choose right now, I'm leaning towards A, i mean, porn and potential story progression between the princess and hero? Maybe the hero gets so horny she takes her frustrations out in a sex-filled assault on the princess?
4C - Again, more chance for story, the enemies can be decently strong without being overwhelming, and it's more like a tutorial if each fight has a gimick to learn and overcome.
Also, even if it's not much, thanks for the chapter. I'm constantly waiting for your updates. Enjoying the story so far. Try not to burn yourself out.
And with that, my usual 'too long and thought out for a fetish story' post is complete.
Posted by Ranorak 2 years ago Report
1) C - As fun as the other options are, it feels like kicking an already sad puppy.
2) B - This place is ment for the Hero to travel through and get stronger (Having a dragon in the party might tip the odds quite a bit!)
3) A - ...what? Got to have some fun at some point ¬_¬;
4) C - Fights are nice but seeing them work together is nice character building. :)
Posted by Raybibbus01 2 years ago Report
My votes are as follows
1: c
2: b
3: c
4: b
Posted by SirScotty 2 years ago Report
1C
2B
3A
3C
Posted by giblieherps 2 years ago Report
A, B, A, B. For the first part tease her but dont break her, help her dry off but use language like taking care of his special/precious treasures/property, also try to infuse some draconic magic into those words. After this start building rune back up as his little hero.
Posted by giblieherps 2 years ago Report
Also as someone mentioned earlier, pulling horny girls out of a stomache sack after they finish with each other once or twice to work their frustrations out would be cool.
Posted by giblieherps 2 years ago Report
This needs to come up in a story i believe, aquatic world sounds like the place.
https://youtu.be/V2x8ts5STzY
Posted by nyanyan 2 years ago Report
Just posting toet you know I'm looking forward to the next chapter, a d to make sure you haven't burned out on us. From the previous couple posts, I am hopeful that you'll be updating this soon.
Keep up the good work.
Posted by Arthotus 2 years ago Report
Still thinking about it! I'll get back to it soonTM. Haha
Posted by Acnologia 2 years ago Report
In condizioni diverse la scelta sarebbe stata un'altra. Ma è ancora troppo "Rotta" per provare qualcosa che non sia C.
Avversari deboli per persone normali più qualche nemico coriaceo e tosto per l'eroina.... Niente che possa impensierire un drago. B
Soprattutto A, ma anche B solletica la curiosità.
Sparsi. Non dimentichiamo che si parla pur sempre di un percorso che avrebbe dovuto elevare il carattere dell'eroina e le sue abilità. Quindi sconfiggere dopo innumerevoli prove alcuni mostri potrebbe giovare all'eroina oltre che a noi sotto più aspetti. C
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Spero, esca presto.