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Following a duel for the fate of two tribes, the loser recounts their final experience.
Another piece that focuses first on submission, and concludes with some cooking cannibalism.
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I tend to keep things ambiguous in my stories when it comes to the identities of the characters, at least for these types of stories. I like the idea of leaving enough to the imagination that someone could insert whatever character they please into this story and still have it work. Plus it leaves a bit of anonymity, since some of my stories involve characters I use elsewhere.
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Posted by ryanshowseason3 2 years ago Report
I like the concept but keeping it entirely genderless kind of robs it of the eroticism imo. One of those cases where trying to be consumable by anyone makes it especially appealing to no one.
Just the opinion of a cis hetero though.
I guess I can say it's intriguing because my mind started filling in the blanks and wanted to imagine the power exchange between different gender pairings. It works for any combination. Which was your goal I suppose but I didn't want to do all the work!
Posted by JustLewdArchive 1 year ago Report
Thanks for the feedback!
Yeah, that's totally fair. I know that personally I've had stories where I was turned off because a character was gendered and it didn't fit my tastes, and I'm usually more interested in the premise of a story anyway, so I wanted to try this out as a bit of an experiment. I can definitely see how that wouldn't be everyone's cup of tea though.
I've got other much longer partially-done pieces drafted that are more character-driven, but it'll probably be a good while before I ever get around to finishing them...