Posted by Matanuiv 2 years ago Report

...Gods, did that ending hit hard. It's a rough situation all-around, and there's too many variables presented here to say who's more at fault between Tammy and her parents, but regardless I think she's learning a harsh lesson: actions have consequences.

Great story, by the way. My heart just dropped at the end there.

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Yupp, I wanted the situation to be conflicted. I like situations that are more Grey rather than good vs evil

Posted by Dews 2 years ago Report

Well that ending was a little saddening, but I don't really feel like the fact that he was fond of her in his own way changes anything about what he did. He was still abusive, just like his wife was, and both of them were still nasty, horrible people that did a lot of harm to Tammy.

Whether or not they loved her really doesn't make a difference. Their actions still hurt her just the same, she was harmed just the same, and ultimately, their actions had the consequence of seeing them be the cause of their daughter's predatory awakening.

I think she's crying too much for someone who doesn't really deserve the sympathy.

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

True, but she’s young, alone, and has no support system. Rough times ahead~

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report

Yowza that was depressing, good one!

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

I gotta make you feel something every now and then~

Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report

family annihilated

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Fatality~

Posted by Segundoetapa 2 years ago Report

Damn what an ending, I wonder what you have plans for Tammy now? Will she get her act together (who’s gonna pay for the mortgage now?!?!?!) or fall on someone else’s waistline :3

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Bold of you to assume that the house isn’t paid for~

Posted by Segundoetapa 2 years ago Report

…fair enough BUT what about the property taxes ooo spooky~ lol

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

The horrors of property ownership is the real tragedy here~

Posted by KinkyRegrets 2 years ago Report

Damn, I was enjoying the revenge... but the ending is really sad :c
Still, an outstanding job, I loved both parts ^^

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

I like to make you feel something every once and a while haha~

Posted by KinkyRegrets 2 years ago Report

You made me feel the hot warmth of anger just to throw me under FREEZING WATER!!!
THAT ENDING DID HURT ME A LOT!!!
But it was really good, I wasn't expecting that kind of plot twist on a vore story. ^^

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Sorry! My love for horror and romance movies leaks into my writing sometimes : /

Posted by KinkyRegrets 2 years ago Report

it's okay, I was a really nice read, I enjoyed every second of it ^^

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Thanks babe~

Posted by RachelBabe 2 years ago Report

Very good stuff. Actually e m o t i o n is not what I expected today but still good.

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

It’s healthy to f e e l once in a while!

Posted by RachelBabe 2 years ago Report

True, i feel like not a lot of stories go into how bonkers society would be if killing people was casualized so much it was to go to for petty revenges, or for sexual desire. At the same time I know a lot of people prefer to gloss over it.

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

Well, if you delve too deeply into it, you break your world because you can’t account for all the possible variables. It’s ok to touch on some implications, but never dive too deep~

Posted by 123alfonzo123 2 years ago Report

eh not super feeling it? it feels a bit too dark for my tastes, kinda takes me out of it.

Also one criticism is not enuf wg descriptions at the end, thats what i liked about the first one

Posted by DreamEater 2 years ago Report

That’s fair~

Posted by AshleyYamahara 1 year ago Report

Wondering if this one will end up on DA, my hopes are still aliiive