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Sandra is starting to accept things... sort of, and gets more into Al. Maya is still not wanting to budge. At least the humans are enjoying themselves
Posted by Lukenul 2 years ago Report
Enjoying the story! As fun as the chaos is that’s adding to the conflict, it would still be nice to see some progression towards a resolution. Also, I think you’re mixing up “gape” for “gasp” given how often it’s used.
Posted by Lukenul 2 years ago Report
At least some of the time, I mean! It’s not every time.